Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
12-13-2009, 11:52 AM
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Replies: 367
Views: 63,356
I like this song allot--it expresses my...
I like this song allot--it expresses my sentiments towards conflict. No truth except the truth of conflict right? lol. Anyways, I only have two critiques this time for you:
1. your a little too...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
11-03-2009, 02:50 PM
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Replies: 62
Views: 8,200
It used to be tradition to name the song after...
It used to be tradition to name the song after the first line, so if you were to name your song there, you might as well just call it "Loose Ankles"
I used to not be a fan of highly cryptic poems,...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
11-03-2009, 02:44 PM
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Replies: 558
Views: 85,392
there should be changed to their.
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there should be changed to their.
there should be changed to they're
btw, that's a hard hitting line right there. Made my heart drop through my stomach it did.
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
11-03-2009, 02:40 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 811
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
11-02-2009, 05:35 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 1,791
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
11-02-2009, 05:33 PM
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Replies: 367
Views: 63,356
No, those are sortof lame arguments. We know...
No, those are sortof lame arguments. We know it's metaphorical for a bigger more economically based mass murdering.
It really is a brilliant book. I know you would love it. Read it twice.
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
11-01-2009, 01:50 PM
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Replies: 367
Views: 63,356
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
11-01-2009, 01:41 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 1,791
Your lyrics are basic. They're good enough to...
Your lyrics are basic. They're good enough to give someone to sing without being laughable (in the situation given). There's nothing I would really change.
But, all you metal heads seem to like...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
10-29-2009, 03:46 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 795
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
10-29-2009, 03:44 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 811
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
10-27-2009, 04:17 PM
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Replies: 12
Views: 2,062
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Forum: Talk Instruments
10-26-2009, 05:44 PM
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Replies: 75
Views: 41,510
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Forum: Talk Instruments
10-26-2009, 07:38 AM
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Replies: 75
Views: 41,510
When I started, I learned:
Lithium,
Heart...
When I started, I learned:
Lithium,
Heart Shaped Box,
Karma Police,
China Grove,
Sweet Home Alabama,
Freebird,
...I think it's safe to say that I haven't played any of those songs in...
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Forum: Talk Instruments
10-25-2009, 09:12 PM
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Replies: 52
Views: 15,428
*sigh*, tell him to read the first line....
*sigh*, tell him to read the first line. (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Drums) Wikipedia is, in fact, more accurate than your average encyclopedia.
It's like scientific fact yo. I mean, that's...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
10-19-2009, 05:39 PM
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Replies: 11
Views: 1,986
believe it or not, I'm kinda glad you didn't...
believe it or not, I'm kinda glad you didn't disappear off the face of the earth. A little variety is nice, even when it's cliché. A good song is often based more on it's context than it's actual...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
10-14-2009, 05:05 PM
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Replies: 6
Views: 895
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
10-10-2009, 07:13 AM
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Replies: 367
Views: 63,356
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
10-08-2009, 07:00 PM
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Replies: 6
Views: 895
Well you've got this poem here, and it needs...
Well you've got this poem here, and it needs music, or at least some form of context, otherwise there's nothing to say besides the fact that it's good for a poem, although the deep and cutting...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
10-08-2009, 02:13 PM
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Replies: 138
Views: 16,772
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
10-06-2009, 03:13 PM
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Replies: 33
Views: 4,881
Screw you Asshat for being better than me.
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Screw you Asshat for being better than me.
It doesn't take much to be better than me.
Still... *sigh* as a note, you don't really have to sing this. You can go the route of the hot snakes and...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
10-05-2009, 04:02 PM
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Replies: 4
Views: 749
I do not like the second, but the first one is...
I do not like the second, but the first one is rather interesting. I like the brick metaphor. For the third, read it to a friend or two to make sure that it sounds right to you. When you read it...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
10-05-2009, 03:59 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 1,313
You seem to emcompass some Andy Mckee, John...
You seem to emcompass some Andy Mckee, John Mayer, Dave Matthews or whatever the names of all those acoustic college bands and artists out there are. It's not bad at all--not my style of course, so...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
10-04-2009, 03:38 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 1,313
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
10-03-2009, 07:40 AM
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Replies: 6
Views: 985
Yes, but that's not a fair comparison. Anybody...
Yes, but that's not a fair comparison. Anybody can write something and say it's better than everything else on this forum. That's like telling the writer he's better at guitar than a four year old....
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
10-01-2009, 07:07 PM
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Replies: 6
Views: 985
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