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Old 10-01-2009, 05:38 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default First In A While ((Untitled))

Dirt clothes the floor -
dust erupts beneath naked feet
building colonies in wrinkled valleys.

Light, reflective - mirrored,
mimicing and blinding;
disguised by clouded corneas.

Disease, infiltration - collapse:
of our Lungs, of our Buildings,
of our roles as Drones.

And a Chair, to rest - to forget
the hatred bred in our gardens;
and dreams that we have killed.

Thanks for reading and please feel free to criticize. If you want, leave a link to something of yours and I'd be happy to give my feedback.
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