Rubber's Songwriting Journal

Rubber · 12-09-2008, 08:47 PM

Most of these are poems not songs, with a couple of exceptions.

Rubber · 01-07-2009, 05:48 PM

my straw
was broken
by a camel's back

your jaw
hit the floor
and it stayed so slack

if it's broken then it's broken
and I think i'll take this token
of the words that went unspoken
and exchange it for the moments
that i'll never get to have with you

no I'm not
laughing at you

there's nothing
else left to do

these thoughts crept into my mind
(I just can't shake them)
sometimes I dream that you lied
(I just can't take them)
but I wake at every sunrise
(I just can't shake them)

and it's the same

**Janszoon** · 01-07-2009, 06:03 PM

A line I came up with once that I've always wanted to fit into a song but have never been able to is:

She was an old and floppy-breasted whore.

Rubber · 01-07-2009, 06:26 PM

haha here let me help you out with that.

Rubber · 01-07-2009, 06:28 PM

looks like i'll have to squeeze a syllable in though

**Janszoon** · 01-07-2009, 06:51 PM

Heh. Nice.

Rubber · 01-07-2009, 08:00 PM

I need captain caveman to come tell me if this sucks or not.

~~CAPTAIN CAVEMAN~~ · 01-07-2009, 08:34 PM

get off my back

it does suck though

**Janszoon** · 01-07-2009, 08:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by CAPTAIN CAVEMAN

get off my back

it does suck though

Except my contribution of course.

Rubber · 01-07-2009, 09:01 PM

alright. but I think my band might actually use these now, and i'll finally succeed in turning us into a posi-core band. because there aren't enough of those already.

12-09-2008, 08:47 PM	#1 (permalink)
Rubber sidewalks Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Novi Posts: 401	Rubber's Songwriting Journal Most of these are poems not songs, with a couple of exceptions. __________________ and we stayed, sixteen. Last edited by Rubber; 06-03-2009 at 02:30 PM.

01-07-2009, 05:48 PM	#2 (permalink)
Rubber sidewalks Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Novi Posts: 401	lyrics that I'll never use my straw was broken by a camel's back your jaw hit the floor and it stayed so slack if it's broken then it's broken and I think i'll take this token of the words that went unspoken and exchange it for the moments that i'll never get to have with you no I'm not laughing at you there's nothing else left to do these thoughts crept into my mind (I just can't shake them) sometimes I dream that you lied (I just can't take them) but I wake at every sunrise (I just can't shake them) and it's the same __________________ and we stayed, sixteen. Last edited by Rubber; 01-11-2009 at 02:10 PM.

01-07-2009, 06:03 PM	#3 (permalink)
Janszoon Mate, Spawn & Die Join Date: May 2007 Location: The Rapping Community Posts: 24,593	A line I came up with once that I've always wanted to fit into a song but have never been able to is: She was an old and floppy-breasted whore. __________________ A Night in the Life of the Invisible Man Time & Place 25 Albums You Should Hear Before the Moon Crashes into the Earth and We All Die last.fm

01-07-2009, 06:26 PM	#4 (permalink)
Rubber sidewalks Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Novi Posts: 401	haha here let me help you out with that. __________________ and we stayed, sixteen.

01-07-2009, 06:28 PM	#5 (permalink)
Rubber sidewalks Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Novi Posts: 401	looks like i'll have to squeeze a syllable in though __________________ and we stayed, sixteen.

01-07-2009, 06:51 PM	#6 (permalink)
Janszoon Mate, Spawn & Die Join Date: May 2007 Location: The Rapping Community Posts: 24,593	Heh. Nice. __________________ A Night in the Life of the Invisible Man Time & Place 25 Albums You Should Hear Before the Moon Crashes into the Earth and We All Die last.fm

01-07-2009, 08:00 PM	#7 (permalink)
Rubber sidewalks Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Novi Posts: 401	I need captain caveman to come tell me if this sucks or not. __________________ and we stayed, sixteen.

01-07-2009, 08:34 PM	#8 (permalink)
~~CAPTAIN CAVEMAN~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: VAN Posts: 2,530	get off my back it does suck though

01-07-2009, 09:01 PM	#10 (permalink)
Rubber sidewalks Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Novi Posts: 401	alright. but I think my band might actually use these now, and i'll finally succeed in turning us into a posi-core band. because there aren't enough of those already. __________________ and we stayed, sixteen.