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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 12-12-2007, 01:24 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,137
Posted By moonage-t
That day you woke up

banging your fist on the hospital doors
waiting for a sign of life, it never comes
and now you're done

sitting in the next room while they exchange stories
of how far you've come, but your...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 12-12-2007, 10:15 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,420
Posted By moonage-t
hmm I wanted to keep the last line as I wanted to...

hmm I wanted to keep the last line as I wanted to make it clear that calling the girl's voice had little impact even before the protagonist's voice had died.

Like, the "worked even less than it...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 12-12-2007, 09:22 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,420
Posted By moonage-t
thanks very much for the comments, the last part...

thanks very much for the comments, the last part was something that's been swimming around in my head for a while but I keep struggling to represent it well in the form of lyrics
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 12-12-2007, 06:35 AM
Replies: 406
Views: 74,994
Posted By moonage-t
This is really good. As Crowquill said it took an...

This is really good. As Crowquill said it took an unexpected turn which drew me in.
I can't imagine how this would fit to music but I'm sure you know yourself.
I'd like to see this theme of Me,...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 12-11-2007, 08:17 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,420
Posted By moonage-t
Tell me that practising has at least slightly improved my writing

why do you tell me that you're so alone?
As if I'm not here at all
It's not within my reach to overthrow the queen
because my hands are always tied to your bedpost
every night we breathe into our...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 12-11-2007, 07:49 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 3,343
Posted By moonage-t
thankyou for that, I much appreciate the helpful...

thankyou for that, I much appreciate the helpful reply rather than the 'shoot him down' approach.

As you can see I haven't quite got the nack of songwriting as of yet... I tend to restrain myself...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 12-09-2007, 10:05 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 3,343
Posted By moonage-t
hohoho

hohoho
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 12-02-2007, 06:17 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,730
Posted By moonage-t
Arcade Fire

She parades along these streets with not a penny to her name
her dresses sewn by lovers, blind to the lasses game
and I'm one of a few who seek her at my bedroom door
yes I am one of many, and...
Forum: General Music 11-18-2007, 05:14 PM
Replies: 130
Views: 19,734
Posted By moonage-t
I would wager around 90. I counted it up about 4...

I would wager around 90. I counted it up about 4 years ago and I had reached 40. I'm proud of my CD collection, it could bring a grown man to tears.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 11-16-2007, 05:15 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 1,223
Posted By moonage-t
You never quite know how long your life will last

so embrace it before it runs out.




as my body grows older
my memory will collapse
your bright eyes will vanish
and I'll forget to bring them back
all this talk of wasted life,
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 11-16-2007, 02:20 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 3,343
Posted By moonage-t
does that make it good, or bad?

does that make it good, or bad?
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 11-15-2007, 05:01 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 3,343
Posted By moonage-t
First piece of work, please review

Shame you had to waste all your time on me,
oh how I dread to think of all those possibilities
you wasted...
Would you believe I lay awake every night
thinking of how I devoured your time

Not...
Forum: Indie & Alternative 11-14-2007, 04:42 AM
Replies: 265
Views: 41,130
Posted By moonage-t
All I Need and Videotape, easily. I tried...

All I Need and Videotape, easily. I tried downloading Videotape ages ago, but all I could get was the live versions. Really glad they released it with this album.
Forum: Introductions 11-10-2007, 04:43 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,234
Posted By moonage-t
Solihull, close to ol' Birmingham. The...

Solihull, close to ol' Birmingham.

The weather is ****e round these parts but the pussy is good.
Forum: Introductions 11-10-2007, 10:21 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,234
Posted By moonage-t
hello, hello

good evening, good morning, etcetc

I'm a new member, as you can possibly tell from my low post-count

I'm a 17 year old male, and I live in Blighty.
My current musical obsessions at this moment...
Forum: Indie & Alternative 11-10-2007, 10:10 AM
Replies: 265
Views: 41,130
Posted By moonage-t
It's amazing what they did with this album,...

It's amazing what they did with this album, allowing the buyer to choose the price they wanted to pay, though I doubt it will really shake up the music industry. I mean, Radiohead can afford to make...
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