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12-02-2007, 07:17 PM | #1 (permalink) |
Groupie
Join Date: Nov 2007
Posts: 14
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Arcade Fire
She parades along these streets with not a penny to her name
her dresses sewn by lovers, blind to the lasses game and I'm one of a few who seek her at my bedroom door yes I am one of many, and maybe ten dozen more She said she'd stop being loyal to all of those old hounds for me, put to bed those sins of hers and lay to rest her love of money but I wonder, how long can I wait, sitting patiently with fingers crossed til she understands the value of those roses through her letterbox? No word of a return from my bright eyed wonder of a girl blue skies now mean more to me than they ever have or ever will Each day that I wake up too late to get anything important done shall be spent thinking of her, the girl I could have won. And how does it feel, my love, to be a trophy on a mantlepiece? For wealthy, idle hands, whose wives are long deceased I am young and vibrant, I have a fortune yet to earn! And when that day comes, perhaps then I'll be of your concern. |
12-02-2007, 08:29 PM | #2 (permalink) |
Music Rapist
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Somewhere in the U.S
Posts: 400
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Sounds like a girl that went and had sex alot... i imagine you could put a good song to it, i dislike the words tho
try adding more depth to it.
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A soul in tension thats learning to fly Condition grounded but determined to try Cant keep my eyes from the circling skies Tongue-tied and twisted just an earth-bound misfit Last edited by TheCaster; 12-02-2007 at 08:39 PM. |
12-02-2007, 09:18 PM | #3 (permalink) | |
Ban Captain Caveman
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: In The Realms of Poetry
Posts: 560
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For some reason reminds me of the two women in Taxi Driver (probably because I watched it last night...) Its okay. The rhyming is horrid.
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