First piece of work, please review (cover, quote, hands)

moonage-t · 12-11-2007, 07:49 PM

thankyou for that, I much appreciate the helpful reply rather than the 'shoot him down' approach.

As you can see I haven't quite got the nack of songwriting as of yet... I tend to restrain myself from what I really want to write by sticking to a certain narrative that is usually not as good as I intend it to be.

But yeah, I'll keep on writing. Nothing will stop me from doing that. It's an expression of self, at the very least. I'm just hoping that one day my lyrics will be appealing to others aswell as myself

12-11-2007, 07:49 PM	#16 (permalink)
moonage-t Groupie Join Date: Nov 2007 Posts: 14	thankyou for that, I much appreciate the helpful reply rather than the 'shoot him down' approach. As you can see I haven't quite got the nack of songwriting as of yet... I tend to restrain myself from what I really want to write by sticking to a certain narrative that is usually not as good as I intend it to be. But yeah, I'll keep on writing. Nothing will stop me from doing that. It's an expression of self, at the very least. I'm just hoping that one day my lyrics will be appealing to others aswell as myself