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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 11-17-2006, 01:49 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,394
Posted By crashingsun
Ah, Japan premiere lyric wrote. He spread himself...

Ah, Japan premiere lyric wrote. He spread himself wide for us to see all thing. He long in heart and hard is good too. Sad happy fun time, no? :usehead:
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-01-2006, 10:59 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 1,509
Posted By crashingsun
How about, "now we're lost in all the spaces"? I...

How about, "now we're lost in all the spaces"? I like that better. And title: Lost in all the Spaces.

The world giving up/forgetting could be a high ending, or maybe they're ghosts and got...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-27-2006, 12:17 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 2,737
Posted By crashingsun
I appreciate that everyone here is honest, which...

I appreciate that everyone here is honest, which is always better than false praise so you can get a return review. The vox of all those songs were done a while ago when I first started singing but...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-27-2006, 08:44 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,333
Posted By crashingsun
This might be the best lyrics of yours I've read,...

This might be the best lyrics of yours I've read, hobo. I really don't care very much for your stuff but after seeing all the mediocre poetry around here that tries to pass as song lyrics this is...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-27-2006, 08:08 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 2,737
Posted By crashingsun
Formatting error, but I went back and fixed it: ...

Formatting error, but I went back and fixed it:



Thanks for the Crazy feedback, but I'm still not really convinced. I wonder if anyone tried listening to the song as they read. :hphones:
...
Forum: General Music 01-25-2006, 03:07 PM
Replies: 474
Views: 113,534
Posted By crashingsun
if depressing-good I stick with floyd ...

if depressing-good I stick with floyd

depressing-bad probably coldplay though i don't think I've listened to an entire song so maybe i shouldn't judge them except most people i know seem to hate...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-25-2006, 09:04 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 2,737
Posted By crashingsun
I seriously doubt that. On the off-chance that...

I seriously doubt that. On the off-chance that anyone here means it, all the lyrics I've posted have demo music that can be found at the link in my signature. That's with the exception of "Chain...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-25-2006, 07:31 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 2,737
Posted By crashingsun
Question The Right Way Blue

sleeping, in the deep bottomless blue
drifting, can you pull me through
or will you pass me on the top side
leaving me the right way blue

gulls cry above the cold coral reef
where rising...
Forum: General Music 01-24-2006, 01:51 PM
Replies: 474
Views: 113,534
Posted By crashingsun
I voted for Other, or Floyd the Wall. High...

I voted for Other, or Floyd the Wall. High quality depression. Blue Sky might actually be the most depressing song in the album but there's a few close ones. The only thing I don't understand is...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-24-2006, 07:18 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 2,731
Posted By crashingsun
this was not written with any serious intent but...

this was not written with any serious intent but thanks for the thought
that's also why i said throw in a verse if you like
i'd love to see a metal band pick this up, probably one that doesn't take...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-23-2006, 09:34 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 2,731
Posted By crashingsun
Chain Letter

I checked my mail today and this happened...
feel free to suggest a third verse, I think it needs one...

CHAIN LETTER BITCH
(thrash/metal)

why do you waste your time on me
with useless...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-17-2006, 09:36 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,638
Posted By crashingsun
not sure why you posted this but I guess it's...

not sure why you posted this but I guess it's fair game for review contribution

the only way I can see it working is as a country or drinking song

it's too average and depressing in an...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-17-2006, 07:32 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 1,815
Posted By crashingsun
you should probably say what "it" is -- I didn't...

you should probably say what "it" is -- I didn't understand this line



(a-hard-lyrics-a-gonna-fall)

not sure I like the message but the flow seems to be there
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-13-2006, 07:57 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,163
Posted By crashingsun
"smile for your warmth" it's saying "don't grow...

"smile for your warmth"
it's saying "don't grow old," not "grow up"


this is a song for you, not for me

thanks for the thoughts
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-12-2006, 07:59 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,163
Posted By crashingsun
Lightbulb a song for you

out of the way or keep moving on
you might make a knight but you're still a pawn
running in circles all the time
you must get dizzy when waking down the line

you say that the world is cold
so...
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