Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
07-31-2006, 06:50 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 1,166
~~Final decisions~~
I stand here pondering
Of a final decision
Looking like a fool
But I don’t have much time
So I can't care about that
Shift to the right
Then to the left
If I make the wrong decision
Right...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
07-27-2006, 05:17 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 1,362
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
07-27-2006, 05:12 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 1,362
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
07-27-2006, 05:05 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 1,362
How is it suicidal? No where did it describe...
How is it suicidal? No where did it describe killing or harming herself. But is it really so much cliche, cause i could of just said she saw her husband cheating with her best friend, went frantic,...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
07-27-2006, 04:57 PM
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Replies: 21
Views: 3,604
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
07-27-2006, 04:51 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 1,362
~~Shattering~~
{Part one}
My heart shatters into pieces
At the sight laid out before me
My husband and my best friend
Together, naked, in each others arms
The bloodstained glass pieces
Stab into my near-by...
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Forum: Rap & Hip-Hop
07-02-2006, 05:09 PM
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Replies: 189
Views: 32,864
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Forum: The Lounge
07-02-2006, 05:01 PM
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Replies: 157
Views: 15,861
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
07-02-2006, 04:28 PM
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Replies: 0
Views: 1,098
Part two of "Can't"
Sequel to this poem....
You won't
Couldn’t stop myself from helping
You when you were in doubt
Simply when you were in trouble
I just quickly pulled you out
But suddenly you’re pushing me...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
07-02-2006, 06:16 AM
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Replies: 3
Views: 2,440
Bolded = like/likeish
Underlined = what???...
Bolded = like/likeish
Underlined = what??? don't you mean upon, how can you be inside it?
IMO, you should think of a better chorus, and fix up the last two lines of the Blue stanza
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Forum: Introductions
06-29-2006, 11:38 PM
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Replies: 15
Views: 2,098
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Forum: The Lounge
06-29-2006, 11:37 PM
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Replies: 115
Views: 12,187
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Forum: Rap & Hip-Hop
06-12-2006, 11:55 AM
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Replies: 174
Views: 22,287
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Forum: Rap & Hip-Hop
06-12-2006, 11:53 AM
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Replies: 189
Views: 32,864
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Forum: Introductions
05-30-2006, 08:29 AM
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Replies: 22
Views: 3,005
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Forum: Introductions
05-29-2006, 01:13 PM
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Replies: 22
Views: 3,005
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Forum: Introductions
05-29-2006, 01:10 PM
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Replies: 39,681
Views: 7,632,453
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Forum: Rap & Hip-Hop
05-28-2006, 02:50 AM
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Replies: 189
Views: 32,864
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Forum: Rap & Hip-Hop
05-28-2006, 02:43 AM
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Replies: 189
Views: 32,864
Hey im not saying he's a great rapper, im just...
Hey im not saying he's a great rapper, im just saying how she said it, was just plainly showing she just hatin.
Why would you listen to the girl who is sayin 50 cents lyrics are poor, when she...
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Forum: Rap & Hip-Hop
05-28-2006, 02:39 AM
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Replies: 55
Views: 11,582
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Forum: Rap & Hip-Hop
05-28-2006, 02:20 AM
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Replies: 189
Views: 32,864
yea, i think 50 is sorta a sell-out, then again...
yea, i think 50 is sorta a sell-out, then again he is a a marketing genius, BUT, he has gon through stained **** too. He not only thinks he's hard cause he got shot 9 times. How can he barely speak...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
05-22-2006, 07:35 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 1,582
Hmm, cant disagree with that.
His song...
Hmm, cant disagree with that.
His song Hurricane is about something serious, but when i listen to it i get the sense of going on a road trip. Rushing, driving, chillin, conflicts all mixed...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
05-22-2006, 07:30 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 1,582
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Forum: Rap & Hip-Hop
05-22-2006, 06:28 PM
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Replies: 294
Views: 64,499
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
05-22-2006, 06:21 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 1,582
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