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Creation Date: 01-30-2009 04:11 PM
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hi guys baisicly im using this blog to put some of the songs i have writen i could really do with feedback
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Status: Public
Entries: 6
Comments: 3
Views: 8,459

In Music alone Entry Tools
  #4 New 02-04-2009 10:16 AM
Alone

Even though your right here
next to me
I still fell alone
No matter how close
Nothing makes me feel
so far from you

I’ve been keeping this locked away
Away from family and friends
I heard you mention the way you feel
I feel its not time yet

My heart is sinking
Sinking away
Like a weight
I need saving
You’re the only one who can

Even though your right here
next to me
I still fell alone
No matter how close
Nothing makes me feel
so far from you

You say ...More Read More
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In Music Read my mind Entry Tools
  #3 New 02-02-2009 02:02 PM
a song about wanting to say somthing to somone important to you but not having the courage to say so.

Read my mind

If you could read my mind
You would know
How I feel tonight
We’ve been packed together
for an hour now

But its all about timing
It has to be perfect
She doesn’t feel the same
If only she could read my mind

Its getting late
The party is drawing to a close
She’s not going to hang around for ever
The question must be asked
You know it
Yet it cant be ...More Read More
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In Music my first ever song Entry Tools
  #2 New 02-01-2009 03:33 PM
Can do better

now I’m sat here all by my self,
your dancing with someone else
Now iv got to find a way to,
to get you back now
Cant you see I’m slipping away
I know you can do better, but not for much longer.

You can do better of this I know
But your making me afraid,
making me afraid
That your being pulled away from me
By someone else
Cant you see

He may be a charmer but
When his friends come
Its like a kick in the gut
He will leave you
His friends come firs ...More Read More
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In Music introduction Entry Tools
  #1 New 02-01-2009 03:28 PM
hi i just thought i would introduce myself
i am fourteen and have been writing songs for a few weeks and i was curious as to what people have thought so i decided to post them on here

baisicly this blog i am putting all of my songs (that dont break the rules) as the threads in the artists corner of the forum are my best/personal favrioutes
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