stuck (quote, song, emo, 1983)

deep_and_depressing · 02-23-2009, 07:42 PM

told me what exactly? Soooo lost.

darkcornerinthecloset · 02-23-2009, 07:45 PM

that you should dump me, dude!

crash_override · 02-23-2009, 07:56 PM

wow this thread just got hardcore.

this is much more intersting.

by the way i would change 'Hellbound life' with Hellbound ride. Just sounds better.

deep_and_depressing · 02-23-2009, 07:57 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by darkcornerinthecloset

that you should dump me, dude!

NOOOOO NEVER!!!!!

Feign · 02-23-2009, 11:48 PM

Yes, and if I did get into a relationship, I didn't want the closet to scare me from being affectionate

deep_and_depressing · 02-24-2009, 03:11 PM

I wrote this one about darkcornerinthecloset. I got to use one of my favorite metaphors in this one.
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Explain this feeling I get inside
‘cause I was told love involved butterflies.
I’m down on my knees begging you please
to feel the same about me.
This stabbing pain fills my heart when I hide how I feel today
And I can’t even find the words to say.

[chorus] If I can’t have your love
Chain me down to the ocean floor
So I can drown and hurt no more.

You’re more beautiful than a starlit sky
At twenty past midnight.
For once I wanna fall in love
And land gently on my feet
‘cause every other time I’ve landed
Face-down in concrete.

[chorus] x2

I hide these three words I long to say
And even if you walk away
I guess I’ll love you anyway [x3]

[chorus]
Hide these three words I long to say
[chorus]
I still love you anyway.

ArchAngel1024 · 02-24-2009, 05:29 PM

I like the imagery and flow. There weren't any parts that seemed out of place to me.

I love the chorus, by the way. It's a very nice metaphor (I think it would be considered a metaphor).

If you use it in a song, I'd like to hear it.

deep_and_depressing · 02-25-2009, 09:49 AM

By the way my favorite metaphor is the "I wanna fall in love and land gently on my feet..."

TheBig3 · 02-25-2009, 11:59 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by deep_and_depressing

By the way my favorite metaphor is the "I wanna fall in love and land gently on my feet..."

I bought a hallmark card that said that once.

**Janszoon** · 02-25-2009, 12:06 PM

My favorite metaphor is grape juice.

02-23-2009, 07:42 PM	#101 (permalink)
deep_and_depressing Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2008 Posts: 73	told me what exactly? Soooo lost. __________________ My life was like a fairytale . . . Except I left Mr. Charming for his sister

02-24-2009, 03:11 PM	#106 (permalink)
deep_and_depressing Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2008 Posts: 73	Chain Me Down I wrote this one about darkcornerinthecloset. I got to use one of my favorite metaphors in this one. -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Explain this feeling I get inside ‘cause I was told love involved butterflies. I’m down on my knees begging you please to feel the same about me. This stabbing pain fills my heart when I hide how I feel today And I can’t even find the words to say. [chorus] If I can’t have your love Chain me down to the ocean floor So I can drown and hurt no more. You’re more beautiful than a starlit sky At twenty past midnight. For once I wanna fall in love And land gently on my feet ‘cause every other time I’ve landed Face-down in concrete. [chorus] x2 I hide these three words I long to say And even if you walk away I guess I’ll love you anyway [x3] [chorus] Hide these three words I long to say [chorus] I still love you anyway. __________________ My life was like a fairytale . . . Except I left Mr. Charming for his sister

02-25-2009, 09:49 AM	#108 (permalink)
deep_and_depressing Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2008 Posts: 73	By the way my favorite metaphor is the "I wanna fall in love and land gently on my feet..." __________________ My life was like a fairytale . . . Except I left Mr. Charming for his sister

02-25-2009, 12:06 PM	#110 (permalink)
Janszoon Mate, Spawn & Die Join Date: May 2007 Location: The Rapping Community Posts: 24,593	My favorite metaphor is grape juice. __________________ A Night in the Life of the Invisible Man Time & Place 25 Albums You Should Hear Before the Moon Crashes into the Earth and We All Die last.fm

02-23-2009, 07:45 PM	#102 (permalink)
darkcornerinthecloset Music Addict Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Rochester, NY Posts: 160	that you should dump me, dude!

02-23-2009, 07:56 PM	#103 (permalink)
crash_override Seemingly Silenced Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Everett, WA Posts: 2,312	wow this thread just got hardcore. this is much more intersting. by the way i would change 'Hellbound life' with Hellbound ride. Just sounds better.

02-23-2009, 11:48 PM	#105 (permalink)
Feign Music Addict Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: California Posts: 66	Yes, and if I did get into a relationship, I didn't want the closet to scare me from being affectionate

02-24-2009, 05:29 PM	#107 (permalink)
ArchAngel1024 Groupie Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 10	I like the imagery and flow. There weren't any parts that seemed out of place to me. I love the chorus, by the way. It's a very nice metaphor (I think it would be considered a metaphor). If you use it in a song, I'd like to hear it.