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deep_and_depressing stuck 12-30-2008, 03:16 PM

Wifey Boozer You could start by changing... 12-30-2008, 05:00 PM

deep_and_depressing Rainbows at Midnight The... 01-01-2009, 12:51 PM

empty cup there are a few things that... 01-04-2009, 11:39 PM

deep_and_depressing ok... I may be deep and... 01-06-2009, 04:26 PM

Wifey Boozer I was wrong, this isn't even... 01-06-2009, 05:37 PM

deep_and_depressing ok I understand this was one... 01-06-2009, 06:09 PM

WWWP My thoughts exactly. 01-06-2009, 06:10 PM

deep_and_depressing Deep and Depressing 01-02-2009, 01:19 PM

WWWP Jeeze. Who peed in your... 01-02-2009, 03:48 PM

deep_and_depressing idk - I'm bi & most of my... 01-03-2009, 01:50 PM

sleepy jack so u kissed a girl and you... 01-03-2009, 05:22 PM

deep_and_depressing no it was akward as hell she... 01-04-2009, 12:06 PM

FaSho :rofl::rofl::rofl: That... 01-04-2009, 12:13 PM

Dr_Rez Haha very good modern day... 01-06-2009, 02:48 AM

Arya Stark >.> That sounds like my... 01-03-2009, 03:20 PM

Arya Stark Comparing through experience,... 01-03-2009, 05:23 PM

Arya Stark Holy crap. I can't even... 01-04-2009, 12:08 PM

deep_and_depressing She said it would be ok...... 01-05-2009, 04:26 PM

Arya Stark That's horrible. I'm... 01-06-2009, 01:53 PM

darkcornerinthecloset you ppl are SOO mean to me!... 02-18-2009, 02:59 PM

CAPTAIN CAVEMAN http://www.legaljuice.com/judg... 02-18-2009, 07:11 PM

CAPTAIN CAVEMAN terrible 01-04-2009, 03:00 PM

Arya Stark Terrible poem? Or are you... 01-05-2009, 12:25 PM

CAPTAIN CAVEMAN i'm not trying very hard how... 01-05-2009, 01:36 PM

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aveneficus This is a good piece of... 01-04-2009, 07:30 PM

deep_and_depressing A slightly less depressing... 01-06-2009, 05:09 PM

jackhammer Completely cliched yet it... 01-06-2009, 05:20 PM

deep_and_depressing thanks. I'm trying to edit a... 01-06-2009, 06:11 PM

CAPTAIN CAVEMAN your poems are not depressing... 01-06-2009, 07:38 PM

sleepy jack No you're wrong. They're... 01-06-2009, 10:54 PM

Rubber construktive? wuts that lol 01-06-2009, 11:02 PM

CAPTAIN CAVEMAN :clap: 01-06-2009, 11:14 PM

Arya Stark I like this one a lot better... 01-12-2009, 08:09 PM

aveneficus Best Part: especially the... 01-13-2009, 01:22 PM

Arya Stark True. =P Making it snappy... 01-13-2009, 04:12 PM

deep_and_depressing ya that one sucked I hate it... 01-13-2009, 07:09 PM

Arya Stark Smile and while? Something... 01-14-2009, 09:40 AM

Ace She's shy and self-conscious... 01-17-2009, 02:25 AM

Arya Stark Really? I think it's a tad... 01-17-2009, 03:19 PM

Ace ...and that isn't corny?... 01-18-2009, 01:32 AM

Arya Stark >.< I still like it. =[ 01-18-2009, 07:07 PM

Ace :laughing: On another... 01-19-2009, 01:22 AM

deep_and_depressing I'm not a guy and I don't... 01-26-2009, 08:34 AM

Arya Stark Oh goodness. My ex-drummer... 01-21-2009, 09:32 AM

Ace I love the band, myself. I... 01-21-2009, 11:33 PM

FaSho I liked: And hated: ... 01-21-2009, 09:37 AM

darkcornerinthecloset i agree with you completely,... 02-21-2009, 11:15 AM

Arya Stark I like some of their songs.... 01-22-2009, 02:38 PM

Ace Wait, I totally posted that... 01-28-2009, 10:55 PM

deep_and_depressing Editedness!!!! It's a song... 02-18-2009, 09:31 AM

deep_and_depressing Ink 02-18-2009, 09:20 AM

right-track deep_and_depressing/darkcorner... 02-20-2009, 10:51 AM

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Feign I really enjoyed the lyrics,... 02-21-2009, 04:08 PM

Arya Stark It's a lot less cheesy. ... 02-18-2009, 06:14 PM

Schizotypic Okay, well I read the... 02-20-2009, 03:21 PM

deep_and_depressing ummm... someone that actually... 02-23-2009, 10:47 AM

Arya Stark Obviously she didn't do... 02-23-2009, 12:38 PM

deep_and_depressing That poem was about a girl... 02-23-2009, 02:02 PM

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darkcornerinthecloset that you should dump me, dude! 02-23-2009, 06:45 PM

deep_and_depressing NOOOOO NEVER!!!!! 02-23-2009, 06:57 PM

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crash_override wow this thread just got... 02-23-2009, 06:56 PM

likuidcoka You are my life's ambition... 02-25-2009, 08:18 PM

deep_and_depressing Let the Darkness Overcome 02-26-2009, 08:38 AM

Arya Stark Sigh, I suppose it will occur... 01-07-2009, 10:53 AM

right-track What makes you say... 02-18-2009, 03:02 PM

darkcornerinthecloset you all judge me in what... 02-20-2009, 12:01 PM

adidasss ^ :laughing: 02-18-2009, 03:03 PM

darkcornerinthecloset umm, what time exactly did... 02-19-2009, 12:02 PM

Arya Stark What the hell are you talking... 02-19-2009, 07:38 PM

WWWP CUZ I'M JUST A KIIIIIIIIID... 02-20-2009, 12:14 PM

Rob-Boy HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. 02-21-2009, 08:25 PM

FaSho ^:rofl: 02-20-2009, 01:06 PM

Schizotypic The poem is alright. I think... 02-20-2009, 03:09 PM

Feign I'm g**, and I'm assuming... 02-22-2009, 01:10 AM

darkcornerinthecloset well, whatever sinks your... 02-22-2009, 01:49 PM

deep_and_depressing I'm trying to tell you it... 02-23-2009, 10:38 AM

Feign oh, relationship wise I'm... 02-22-2009, 04:44 PM

crash_override I would turn this into a... 02-22-2009, 10:14 PM

crash_override Still thinking this. 02-23-2009, 01:22 PM

deep_and_depressing idk if I can turn it into any... 02-23-2009, 01:59 PM

FaSho ^Know eachother? 02-23-2009, 11:28 AM

Arya Stark darkcornerinthecloset is the... 02-23-2009, 12:41 PM

FaSho Ohh. Things make much more... 02-23-2009, 02:29 PM

Shoe This was exceptionally... 02-23-2009, 04:07 PM

Feign yeahhhh, that completely went... 02-23-2009, 04:31 PM

deep_and_depressing Yeah I know it's hard but it... 02-23-2009, 06:25 PM

darkcornerinthecloset hmm. do you guys mind? i... 02-23-2009, 06:25 PM

darkcornerinthecloset bitch lol jk 02-23-2009, 06:35 PM

Feign Yes, and if I did get into a... 02-23-2009, 10:48 PM

deep_and_depressing Chain Me Down 02-24-2009, 02:11 PM

ArchAngel1024 I like the imagery and flow.... 02-24-2009, 04:29 PM

deep_and_depressing By the way my favorite... 02-25-2009, 08:49 AM

TheBig3 I bought a hallmark card that... 02-25-2009, 10:59 AM

Janszoon My favorite metaphor is grape... 02-25-2009, 11:06 AM

Schizotypic I don't think that is either... 02-25-2009, 03:28 PM

deep_and_depressing I'm not emo. I'm a perky goth. 02-26-2009, 08:22 AM

adidasss Is it a joke song? 02-26-2009, 08:30 AM

deep_and_depressing Sort of-I guess? It doesn't... 02-26-2009, 08:41 AM

TheBig3 Too many new guys look at... 02-26-2009, 03:28 PM

Arya Stark You guys seem fine. So I... 02-26-2009, 02:46 PM

FaSho Pssh, when was it? 02-27-2009, 02:23 PM

darkcornerinthecloset ur wrong. when you have love... 02-20-2009, 01:49 PM

Urban Hat€monger ? Either comment on the piece... 02-20-2009, 01:50 PM

darkcornerinthecloset wtf? thats not nice! we are... 02-20-2009, 02:13 PM

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empty cup please know, i am no song... 01-06-2009, 08:07 PM

deep_and_depressing HOLY S*** I'M JEALOUS!!! I... 01-13-2009, 07:16 PM

deep_and_depressing Just Thought You Should Know 03-09-2009, 08:51 AM

7gaugejames Just thought you should know;... 03-09-2009, 09:22 AM

deep_and_depressing HOLY SH!T did you seriously... 03-11-2009, 09:27 AM

Freebase Dali I think I just witnessed... 03-11-2009, 06:53 PM

deep_and_depressing Phobias 03-11-2009, 09:24 AM

Freebase Dali I like the concept, but it... 03-11-2009, 06:51 PM

PinkCigarette I got that sense, too, but a... 03-18-2009, 01:42 PM

darkcornerinthecloset If you are afraid of shadows... 03-12-2009, 02:37 PM

deep_and_depressing The combination of light and... 03-13-2009, 08:17 AM

darkcornerinthecloset no frikin duh! but you might... 03-13-2009, 02:46 PM

paradoxy Nice concept, but how about... 03-18-2009, 12:04 PM

deep_and_depressing I really like this one better 03-19-2009, 08:27 AM

someonecompletelyrandom Deep and Depressing. 03-18-2009, 12:28 PM

paradoxy Thank you, glad you weren't... 03-19-2009, 09:25 AM

deep_and_depressing Let the Darkness Overcome 04-19-2009, 10:35 AM

Naked Go live in a third world... 04-19-2009, 06:50 PM

darkcornerinthecloset well no. . .sorry angi 04-19-2009, 06:57 PM

deep_and_depressing Running Away 04-19-2009, 10:46 AM

tymygy I dont really get it :/ ... 04-19-2009, 02:31 PM

darkcornerinthecloset hmm. and why? condense your... 04-19-2009, 06:47 PM

Alfred ^Yeah, advice from one who... 04-19-2009, 06:50 PM

gunnels Your poetry seems to be... 04-19-2009, 06:51 PM

darkcornerinthecloset ^^this is happy then what is... 04-19-2009, 06:55 PM

gunnels I didn't say this was happy... 04-19-2009, 06:58 PM

darkcornerinthecloset SHE dont do happy. and your... 04-19-2009, 07:02 PM

gunnels I'm sorry, I'm a bad person. ... 04-19-2009, 07:06 PM

deep_and_depressing I have less **** to be... 04-19-2009, 10:47 PM

Alfred So what are you running from? 04-19-2009, 06:59 PM

deep_and_depressing everything-specifically... 04-19-2009, 10:46 PM

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02-24-2009, 04:29 PM	#11 (permalink)
ArchAngel1024 Groupie Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 10	I like the imagery and flow. There weren't any parts that seemed out of place to me. I love the chorus, by the way. It's a very nice metaphor (I think it would be considered a metaphor). If you use it in a song, I'd like to hear it.

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