stuck (metal, shows, quote, song)

Feign · 02-22-2009, 02:10 AM

I'm g**, and I'm assuming they did it for very good reasons. (as in people using it as you're so g**, or that's g**...it denotes such a negative connotation, that I honestly don't mind it being censored) hmmm I'm queer. (it worked!)

darkcornerinthecloset · 02-22-2009, 02:49 PM

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Originally Posted by Feign

I'm g**, and I'm assuming they did it for very good reasons. (as in people using it as you're so g**, or that's g**...it denotes such a negative connotation, that I honestly don't mind it being censored) hmmm I'm queer. (it worked!)

well, whatever sinks your submarine! ive tried that road, and still am but its not working for me. your lucky

Feign · 02-22-2009, 05:44 PM

oh, relationship wise I'm failing at every angle. I said it worked for the word queer, since it didn't block it

crash_override · 02-22-2009, 11:14 PM

I would turn this into a death metal song.

deep_and_depressing · 02-23-2009, 11:26 AM

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Originally Posted by darkcornerinthecloset

yeah its an extended metaphor. the demon is the corrupter of the others' mind [the converter, not the original poet]. the mask is the person who lets no one in, who shows no emotion to the outside world. the mask was shattered when the author of the converter version cried, and the latter let them into their life again. the ink from the Iris' are exactly what they are; dark colored eyes.

Yea my irises are scary I KNOW but yours lower the temperature of the room.

deep_and_depressing · 02-23-2009, 11:38 AM

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Originally Posted by darkcornerinthecloset

well, whatever sinks your submarine! ive tried that road, and still am but its not working for me. your lucky

I'm trying to tell you it would be easier if you came out of the closet dammit.

deep_and_depressing · 02-23-2009, 11:47 AM

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Originally Posted by Schizotypic

Okay, well I read the supposedly depressing one. This one is much better, and the edited version of this one kicks the originals ass. Keep at it. Work on condensing and depth. so, another note, what would you be getting out of this chick you can't get yourself?

ummm... someone that actually likes me.

FaSho · 02-23-2009, 12:28 PM

^Know eachother?

Arya Stark · 02-23-2009, 01:38 PM

Obviously she didn't do wonders if she's making you feel this way.

I understand what Schizotypic is saying, he brings a good point to the table.

Arya Stark · 02-23-2009, 01:41 PM

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Originally Posted by FaSho

^Know eachother?

darkcornerinthecloset is the girl that deep_and_depressing is talking about.

That's why she's getting upset.

She didn't make it clear, so now we're here talking about DRAMA instead of the actual text.

Look, the poem is fine as long as you get your feelings out.
Honestly, I thought the second one was better.

The end.

02-22-2009, 02:10 AM	#81 (permalink)
Feign Music Addict Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: California Posts: 66	I'm g, and I'm assuming they did it for very good reasons. (as in people using it as you're so g, or that's g**...it denotes such a negative connotation, that I honestly don't mind it being censored) hmmm I'm queer. (it worked!)

02-22-2009, 05:44 PM	#83 (permalink)
Feign Music Addict Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: California Posts: 66	oh, relationship wise I'm failing at every angle. I said it worked for the word queer, since it didn't block it

02-22-2009, 11:14 PM	#84 (permalink)
crash_override Seemingly Silenced Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Everett, WA Posts: 2,312	I would turn this into a death metal song.

02-23-2009, 01:38 PM	#89 (permalink)
Arya Stark "Hermione-Lite" Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: New York. Posts: 3,084	Obviously she didn't do wonders if she's making you feel this way. I understand what Schizotypic is saying, he brings a good point to the table.