New Song - Michael Jackson Remix (electronic, title, vocalist, youtube)

stranjah · 05-20-2008, 11:09 AM

Here is a new song I am working on entitled 'FREAK'

It samples 'Smooth Criminal' by Michael Jackson.

Please post a comment if you like it.

And if you really like it, drop me an email - and I could send an mp3!

I produce under the name of STRANJAH, and I make all types of electronic beats.

jackhammer · 05-20-2008, 11:24 AM

Moved to the Promotion forum.

I personally think that you should omit the sample. It does'nt fit with the ambience of the song and the keyboard riff that comes in just after a minute seems amateurish. However I do like it and the production is excellent. I would like to hear more.

stranjah · 05-20-2008, 11:38 AM

Thanks for the comment Jackhammer!

I admit the riff after a minute sounds basic... I had written it in hopes of getting a vocalist to sing it.

Glad you do like it still though!

I'll post more of my stuff soon, I'm new to this forum - thanks for moving the post for me.

Respects!

~~2Three~~ · 05-21-2008, 10:43 AM

I enjoyed it. The keyboard riff doesn't sound hard to play, but it sounds good - and that's important, IMO.

05-20-2008, 11:09 AM	#1 (permalink)
stranjah Groupie Join Date: May 2008 Location: TORONTO, CANADA Posts: 2	New Song - Michael Jackson Remix Here is a new song I am working on entitled 'FREAK' It samples 'Smooth Criminal' by Michael Jackson. Please post a comment if you like it. And if you really like it, drop me an email - and I could send an mp3! I produce under the name of STRANJAH, and I make all types of electronic beats.

05-20-2008, 11:24 AM	#2 (permalink)
jackhammer Ba and Be. Join Date: May 2007 Location: This Is England Posts: 17,331	Moved to the Promotion forum. I personally think that you should omit the sample. It does'nt fit with the ambience of the song and the keyboard riff that comes in just after a minute seems amateurish. However I do like it and the production is excellent. I would like to hear more. __________________ It be my music and film collection. “A cynic by experience, a romantic by inclination and now a hero by necessity.”

05-20-2008, 11:38 AM	#3 (permalink)
stranjah Groupie Join Date: May 2008 Location: TORONTO, CANADA Posts: 2	Thanks for the comment Jackhammer! I admit the riff after a minute sounds basic... I had written it in hopes of getting a vocalist to sing it. Glad you do like it still though! I'll post more of my stuff soon, I'm new to this forum - thanks for moving the post for me. Respects!

05-21-2008, 10:43 AM	#4 (permalink)
~~2Three~~ Account Disabled Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 9	I enjoyed it. The keyboard riff doesn't sound hard to play, but it sounds good - and that's important, IMO.