New orginal song i want yall to hear
 

I wrote this song after i caught my ex-wife in bed with another man. I think all people who had a realtionship go bad could relate. It is recorded live so the vedio just has the lyrics with a couple of pics in it. What yall think??

look on youtube for " rcstyx the songs name is cry "

I can upload the url for it since i am new here but maybe someone else can make the link?

Reminds me of Phil Collins.

i'm hoping the upload date of april 1st is indicative of this song's true intentions. otherwise what's the real point? to prove you're over her by singing about her for 4 minutes longer than necessary?

you should also get someone to proofread your lyrics.

i took for granted that you be around - you should be you'd
i thought your feet was planted on the ground - feet is plural, was is singular, should be were
everybody has their mistakes that they make - so she was predestined to sleep around? the mistake already existed it only had to play itself out?

At the time when i wrote this 4 years ago i really didn't care how it was spelled. anywho, its not about her now its about the song and having someone like hinder sing it or remake it. i just wanted to share this with yall.

oh and the mistake part was she was like im sorry please forgive me. i don't think so......

4 years later and you're still trying to promote a song about an ex... yeah you're DEFINITELY over her....

And I thought you said it was NEW

False advertising :(

welll i got all the way to the second line.. then i vomited, so i skipped to half way through... then had explosive diarrhea
hey, at least its causing a significant effect

the high *ting* the drums are playing is annoying
the guitar is bland and boring
the voice is nails on a chalk board

Thanks!

it was recorded live in a shed. im sorry i offended yall.

offended? it was pretty good comparered to some of the **** that goes through here, you could use some improvement. and it would probably better if you had a better recording studio

i must say it was a good attempt

I would just want someone to remake the song. im not playing anylonger with the band. I just thought someone from over here might know or have connections to maybe get this to hinder or some band to here. I just like the song, mainly the chorus.

the new part is.. it was new to you and everybody else. like i said i didn't mean to offend anyone or mislead you. When i went through a rough part of my life i turned to my gutair and write this. it help me out. I was just seeing if someone liked it enoughto remake it and record it to record stands and put it on the radio. it might help others out and who knows, it could be a hit. almost everyone i know feels this way about their ex.

i suppose if you added some piano you could call it a simple plan song.

I find it very generic and the vocals need work but everything else is okay.

very
 

coooool!

The song is good, the performance isn't.

...isn't she supposed to be doing that, she's your X-wife, key part being X.