New orginal song i want yall to hear (lyrics, effect)

shawn pierce · 04-07-2008, 08:49 AM

I wrote this song after i caught my ex-wife in bed with another man. I think all people who had a realtionship go bad could relate. It is recorded live so the vedio just has the lyrics with a couple of pics in it. What yall think??

look on youtube for " rcstyx the songs name is cry "

shawn pierce · 04-07-2008, 08:52 AM

I can upload the url for it since i am new here but maybe someone else can make the link?

pheurton · 04-07-2008, 01:20 PM

Reminds me of Phil Collins.

mr dave · 04-07-2008, 02:59 PM

i'm hoping the upload date of april 1st is indicative of this song's true intentions. otherwise what's the real point? to prove you're over her by singing about her for 4 minutes longer than necessary?

you should also get someone to proofread your lyrics.

i took for granted that you be around - you should be you'd
i thought your feet was planted on the ground - feet is plural, was is singular, should be were
everybody has their mistakes that they make - so she was predestined to sleep around? the mistake already existed it only had to play itself out?

shawn pierce · 04-07-2008, 03:35 PM

At the time when i wrote this 4 years ago i really didn't care how it was spelled. anywho, its not about her now its about the song and having someone like hinder sing it or remake it. i just wanted to share this with yall.

shawn pierce · 04-07-2008, 03:36 PM

oh and the mistake part was she was like im sorry please forgive me. i don't think so......

mr dave · 04-07-2008, 03:37 PM

4 years later and you're still trying to promote a song about an ex... yeah you're DEFINITELY over her....

Urban Hat€monger ? · 04-07-2008, 03:38 PM

And I thought you said it was NEW

Comus · 04-07-2008, 05:35 PM

False advertising

TheCaster · 04-07-2008, 09:43 PM

welll i got all the way to the second line.. then i vomited, so i skipped to half way through... then had explosive diarrhea
hey, at least its causing a significant effect

the high *ting* the drums are playing is annoying
the guitar is bland and boring
the voice is nails on a chalk board

04-07-2008, 08:49 AM	#1 (permalink)
shawn pierce Groupie Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 6	New orginal song i want yall to hear I wrote this song after i caught my ex-wife in bed with another man. I think all people who had a realtionship go bad could relate. It is recorded live so the vedio just has the lyrics with a couple of pics in it. What yall think?? look on youtube for " rcstyx the songs name is cry " Last edited by shawn pierce; 04-08-2008 at 09:29 AM.

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Urban Hat€monger ? The Sexual Intellectual Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Somewhere cooler than you Posts: 18,605	And I thought you said it was NEW __________________ Urb's RYM Stuff Most people sell their soul to the devil, but the devil sells his soul to Nick Cave.

04-07-2008, 09:43 PM	#10 (permalink)
TheCaster Music Rapist Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Somewhere in the U.S Posts: 400	welll i got all the way to the second line.. then i vomited, so i skipped to half way through... then had explosive diarrhea hey, at least its causing a significant effect the high ting the drums are playing is annoying the guitar is bland and boring the voice is nails on a chalk board __________________ A soul in tension thats learning to fly Condition grounded but determined to try Cant keep my eyes from the circling skies Tongue-tied and twisted just an earth-bound misfit

04-07-2008, 08:52 AM	#2 (permalink)
shawn pierce Groupie Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 6	I can upload the url for it since i am new here but maybe someone else can make the link?

04-07-2008, 01:20 PM	#3 (permalink)
pheurton n/a Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 990	Reminds me of Phil Collins.

04-07-2008, 03:35 PM	#5 (permalink)
shawn pierce Groupie Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 6	At the time when i wrote this 4 years ago i really didn't care how it was spelled. anywho, its not about her now its about the song and having someone like hinder sing it or remake it. i just wanted to share this with yall.

04-07-2008, 03:36 PM	#6 (permalink)
shawn pierce Groupie Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 6	oh and the mistake part was she was like im sorry please forgive me. i don't think so......