New orginal song i want yall to hear

shawn pierce · 04-08-2008, 06:35 AM

Thanks!

it was recorded live in a shed. im sorry i offended yall.

TheCaster · 04-08-2008, 08:48 AM

offended? it was pretty good comparered to some of the **** that goes through here, you could use some improvement. and it would probably better if you had a better recording studio

i must say it was a good attempt

shawn pierce · 04-08-2008, 09:15 AM

I would just want someone to remake the song. im not playing anylonger with the band. I just thought someone from over here might know or have connections to maybe get this to hinder or some band to here. I just like the song, mainly the chorus.

the new part is.. it was new to you and everybody else. like i said i didn't mean to offend anyone or mislead you. When i went through a rough part of my life i turned to my gutair and write this. it help me out. I was just seeing if someone liked it enoughto remake it and record it to record stands and put it on the radio. it might help others out and who knows, it could be a hit. almost everyone i know feels this way about their ex.

mr dave · 04-08-2008, 12:43 PM

i suppose if you added some piano you could call it a simple plan song.

jacklovezhimself · 04-08-2008, 09:14 PM

I find it very generic and the vocals need work but everything else is okay.

ripcurl · 04-13-2008, 11:07 PM

coooool!

Whatsitoosit · 05-05-2008, 05:52 PM

The song is good, the performance isn't.

Dr_Rez · 05-07-2008, 10:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by shawn pierce

I wrote this song after i caught my ex-wife in bed with another man. I think all people who had a realtionship go bad could relate. It is recorded live so the vedio just has the lyrics with a couple of pics in it. What yall think??

look on youtube for " rcstyx the songs name is cry "

youtube.com/watch?v=XtgL4xp_SIM

...isn't she supposed to be doing that, she's your X-wife, key part being X.

04-08-2008, 08:48 AM	#12 (permalink)
TheCaster Music Rapist Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Somewhere in the U.S Posts: 400	offended? it was pretty good comparered to some of the **** that goes through here, you could use some improvement. and it would probably better if you had a better recording studio i must say it was a good attempt __________________ A soul in tension thats learning to fly Condition grounded but determined to try Cant keep my eyes from the circling skies Tongue-tied and twisted just an earth-bound misfit

04-08-2008, 09:14 PM	#15 (permalink)
jacklovezhimself five years Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Chicago Posts: 1,248	I find it very generic and the vocals need work but everything else is okay. __________________

04-13-2008, 11:07 PM	#16 (permalink)
ripcurl Groupie Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 1	very coooool!

04-08-2008, 06:35 AM	#11 (permalink)
shawn pierce Groupie Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 6	Thanks! it was recorded live in a shed. im sorry i offended yall.

04-08-2008, 09:15 AM	#13 (permalink)
shawn pierce Groupie Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 6	I would just want someone to remake the song. im not playing anylonger with the band. I just thought someone from over here might know or have connections to maybe get this to hinder or some band to here. I just like the song, mainly the chorus. the new part is.. it was new to you and everybody else. like i said i didn't mean to offend anyone or mislead you. When i went through a rough part of my life i turned to my gutair and write this. it help me out. I was just seeing if someone liked it enoughto remake it and record it to record stands and put it on the radio. it might help others out and who knows, it could be a hit. almost everyone i know feels this way about their ex.

05-05-2008, 05:52 PM	#17 (permalink)
Whatsitoosit Bringer of Carrots Join Date: May 2008 Location: New York, NY Posts: 648	The song is good, the performance isn't.