I know i'm not supposed to do this here but... (singer, instrumental)

skiesofganymede · 04-19-2006, 07:44 PM

The vocals really weren't that bad. You've got a nice tone for recording. Pitching is a little off in some parts, but you're not tone deaf or anything.

The sound itself could do with more direction...like having it culminate in something more. Maybe because of being nervous about your vocals you've gone a safe route and kept them low-pitched and reasonably even paced.

I think the song would benefit heaps if you expanded your singing style (perhaps by getting lessons, which are heaps helpful, but hardly a prerequisit for sounding cool). Maybe look at your vocals in terms of different rhythm patterns and melodies. A full set worth of that singing style would become a bit monotonous. But it's a nice song...minimalist without sounding thin or too amateur...and you have a style that can be developed into something really good.

04-19-2006, 07:44 PM	#6 (permalink)
skiesofganymede Groupie Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 27	The vocals really weren't that bad. You've got a nice tone for recording. Pitching is a little off in some parts, but you're not tone deaf or anything. The sound itself could do with more direction...like having it culminate in something more. Maybe because of being nervous about your vocals you've gone a safe route and kept them low-pitched and reasonably even paced. I think the song would benefit heaps if you expanded your singing style (perhaps by getting lessons, which are heaps helpful, but hardly a prerequisit for sounding cool). Maybe look at your vocals in terms of different rhythm patterns and melodies. A full set worth of that singing style would become a bit monotonous. But it's a nice song...minimalist without sounding thin or too amateur...and you have a style that can be developed into something really good. __________________ Punk is an ideology, not a haircut.