GD

That's heckin' adorable.

And thanks for your story. A wild ride to say the least

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Karice

Thank you and you're welcome!

Karice

Here are some behind the scenes Commentary for my Fictional Axl Rose story.

Cake Cream has this sort of "No Cake Cream left behind/codependent thing," going on, which is why they are always together. They wanted to include Axl in this, which is why they insisted on going with Axl wherever he was going.

Billy is actually the Leader and heart of Cake Cream despite being the Drummer, which is why he is mentioned the most out of all Cake Cream Members. They live in Billy's house, Andy confided in Billy that he felt awful about attempting to sell out Axl for money. Billy is the one Axl told to give the new song to Claven Records wearing a disguise. Billy is the first one Axl calls out of Cake Cream. Billy was the one visited Axl in jail. Billy gave Axl advice multiple times and was his lawyer in the mock Court hearing. Billy was the one who stood up for "Michael," when the rest of Cake Cream showed doubts. Billy is the first one Axl told about his very soon return to 1987 and had a sleepover with Billy. In my newer story, Axl takes multiple gunshots protecting Billy. They also sleep in the same bed in the Hotel stay. And Billy is the first to cool off Axl with the garden hose.

About Axl, I actually used his real life personality for a lot of my Fictional Axl Rose character. My Fictional Axl punching the Paparazzi Person in his face and breaking his Camera is based on how the real Axl would do. One of my favorite parts is y Fictional Axl punching the Paparazzi Person in his face and breaking his Camera. My Fictional Axl being loyal to his Cake Cream Friends is based on the real Axl's loyalties to his Friends.

My Fictional Axl's relieved smirk in his Mugshot is based on the real Axl's mugshot for inadvertently causing the Riverport Concert Riot. His Mugshot for that one is him clearly smirking..

My Fictional Axl's Court Hearing is based on the real Axl's Court Hearing when Steven Adler sued Guns N'Roses for Royalties and back pay after they fired him for being a huge drug addict. The hard and steely gaze my Fictional Axl gave the guy suing him for Assault and destruction of property was based on the hard and steely gaze the real Axl gave Steven's Lawyer in his real Life Court Hearing. That gaze from the real Axl is pretty intimidating and I decided to incorporate it into my Fictional Axl Rose story.

Cake Cream is able to trace Axl's phone to wherever he goes and I implied that Axl had been told that they could trace his Location using his phone and I outright mentioned he just forgot they could do that.

I implied that Axl doesn't sleep anywhere he doesn't trust or feel comfortable. So him falling asleep in Cake Cream's company meant he trusted them and was comfortable with them. He refused to sleep in their Company the night they revealed his tattoo in front of Cake Cream Fans. He slept at his hotel that night.

Axl starts off as being just their Manager, and then also becomes their Mentor/Friend.



About Andy, I wanted to imply that Andy was penny wise, pound foolish. He wanted to sell out Axl for $1,000. Axl ended up getting them $12 million each, plus Royalties. Also Axl got them booked for a gig that paid them about $3,000 each. He also gave them $20,000 on top of all of this. Also, Axl made sure that Cake Cream wouldn't ever be sued by Brian Washington proving he was looking out for them. Axl's a true Friend. Selling out Axl for $1,000 would have been incredibly foolish. I actually considered having Andy screw over his his Cake Cream Members for money, but decided to scrap that idea and make him remorseful for attempting to sell out Axl for $1,000.

Claven Records is the equivalent of the real life Sony Records. Timothy Wilkinson is the only Claven Records Staff Member mentioned by name.

Karice

Guys, I reread my story and I am wondering if I should have started the story with the first part and continued with Axl finding out that Guns N'Roses was doing a show that very night and him buying last minute tickets to Guns N'Roses show where he sees Older Axl, Current Guns N'Roses and Cake Cream. And never writing the parts about him going to Denny's, buying Lottery tickets, going to the hotel, going to the bars, etc. But then his hair wouldn't have been black, he wouldn't be called Michael Randall Johnson as the fake ID wouldn't have existed, Thomas the Waiter wouldn't have known about him the second time they went to Denny's, Axl wouldn't have gotten Vaccinated l, nor would Axl have to sing at the hotel in lieu of the Hotel manager pressing charges, etc. What do you guys think? :/

Karice

Mistake post.

Mucha na Dziko

I think him having to cope with the fact that he does in fact exist in the future and that G'N'R are still a thing, even though he isn't there (he's in the audience) would be much more interesting as a character study.

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But if he had stayed in the Audience, he wouldn't have been able to help Older Axl out when Older Axl lost his voice when he sang that high pitched wail note. :/