MysticMystery

Hey everyone Im new to this site...but I was hoping you all could give some input on this song I am writing to sing to my boyfriend. Heres what I have so far let me know what you all think and please give any feedback if you have any!!!

I fell in love with a guy
who makes me feel happy with who i am
he held my hand in the dark
and walked me through hard times
i never thought id find a love like this
but then i met you
and you changed my whole world
for the better
and now...

im chasin for the stars
and im followin my heart
and its all because he gave me hope
yea
i never thought id find hope again
but then you pushed me through
and never let me go
and now ive fallen in love with you
with all my heart and soul
yea ive fallen in love with you
with all my heart and soul

Thats all I have on the song for right now let me know what you all think!!!