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08-28-2005, 04:33 PM | #11 (permalink) |
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Normally most other psychologists would blame the parents but I've been doing extensive research into cases like yours and I've found that it's because you're probably ***, now please drop your pants and bend over. This'll be your first step on the road of healing. Just make sure you put Project H on if you get a burning next time you ****
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09-29-2005, 05:48 AM | #14 (permalink) | |
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If you want people to be interested in your lyrics then you should first think about WHY they would be interested in the first place and what they would get from it. Hope that helps. |
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09-29-2005, 09:49 AM | #15 (permalink) |
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theres enough angst in there for it to work, its not going to be popular with the masses, but tons of great music isnt. I wouldnt mind hearing it with music behind it. The style i think is what is going to make it stand out. Lyrically it isnt the best, but if assembled with an equally aggressive rythem i think you could be on to something worth listening to.
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09-29-2005, 10:02 AM | #16 (permalink) | |
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09-29-2005, 10:18 AM | #18 (permalink) | |
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it wouldnt work. but the words he chose to use, and the structure he used them in pretty much paints a pretty clear picture as abstract as it may be.
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