Snake: Tales from the Spirit-Dude

SnakeSpiritDude · 12-15-2020, 11:48 AM

Hello Music Banter how's it going? Anyways, I like writing songs, though I'm bad at composing lyrics, so I figured I should post some here. I try to write often, but I normally create a couple of lines at a time, when inspiration hits me. Then I go back and edit those lines, or combine them with other lines. I don't know how to format this tread so that my posts stand out from comments, so I am probably doing this wrong, but it's whatever. I am open to taking criticism, so feel free to speak your mind about my crapola.

SnakeSpiritDude · 12-15-2020, 11:55 AM

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SnakeSpiritDude · 12-16-2020, 01:29 PM

Back at it again with another trash stanza. This time, with chords. I kinda like this one, I will keep on working on it.

"Untitled 2"

bm Am bm
I watched the rain come down last night
Am bm
I saw that smile leave your face

You couldn't stand to be alone
G Cm
(rest) (rest)

12-15-2020, 11:48 AM	#1 (permalink)
SnakeSpiritDude Moosic Addict Join Date: Nov 2020 Location: Everywhere Posts: 65	Snake: Tales from the Spirit-Dude Hello Music Banter how's it going? Anyways, I like writing songs, though I'm bad at composing lyrics, so I figured I should post some here. I try to write often, but I normally create a couple of lines at a time, when inspiration hits me. Then I go back and edit those lines, or combine them with other lines. I don't know how to format this tread so that my posts stand out from comments, so I am probably doing this wrong, but it's whatever. I am open to taking criticism, so feel free to speak your mind about my crapola. __________________ Cool

12-15-2020, 11:55 AM	#2 (permalink)
SnakeSpiritDude Moosic Addict Join Date: Nov 2020 Location: Everywhere Posts: 65	_ __________________ Cool Last edited by SnakeSpiritDude; 12-17-2020 at 01:33 PM. Reason: Deleted it cause of how bad it was

12-16-2020, 01:29 PM	#3 (permalink)
SnakeSpiritDude Moosic Addict Join Date: Nov 2020 Location: Everywhere Posts: 65	"Untitled 2" Back at it again with another trash stanza. This time, with chords. I kinda like this one, I will keep on working on it. "Untitled 2" bm Am bm I watched the rain come down last night Am bm I saw that smile leave your face You couldn't stand to be alone G Cm (rest) (rest) __________________ Cool