Crappy Metal Lyrics

sikoholickkouboi · 08-19-2005, 10:22 PM

I just came across some sh!t I wrote when I was like, 15 or 16. Probably sucks. I laughed when I found it, cuz I thought I had trashed it ages ago. I'm not a musician, but I just wrote these "death metal" lyrics out of boredom. Anyone think this crap's any good?

Asleep with one eye open, daggers pointed at your side.
A hellish nightmare, mind shuts down, awaken deep inside.
Genocidal mutilation, the bodies start to rise.
The stench of mortal massacre engulfs these mortal eyes.
Anger, hate and misery locked away in my soul.
The voice of reason starts to die as violence takes control.

--CHORUS: RAAGGE!--

--Metamorphosis: The dark...side...hasbeencomplete!--
--Dehumanization: Compassion...lost...brokenhaloatmy****ingfeet!--

A bloodthirst like none before.
From man to god, a new level I explore.
And I scream at the moon, as my skin is peeling, AAAAAAHH!
Can't fight the bleeding feeling.
Bones snap, rip the flesh.
Evolution at it's best.

riseagainstrocks · 08-20-2005, 06:54 PM

that first verse is actually pretty cool. in a way.

reminds me of some Naglfar lyrics though...

phoenixflames · 08-22-2005, 09:14 PM

Not my style as far as lyrical content goes, but it does at least use some good words and rhyme. Its so hard to judge music on lyrics alone, seems like they are usually always better with music.

08-19-2005, 10:22 PM	#1 (permalink)
sikoholickkouboi Music Addict Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 33	Crappy Metal Lyrics I just came across some sh!t I wrote when I was like, 15 or 16. Probably sucks. I laughed when I found it, cuz I thought I had trashed it ages ago. I'm not a musician, but I just wrote these "death metal" lyrics out of boredom. Anyone think this crap's any good? Asleep with one eye open, daggers pointed at your side. A hellish nightmare, mind shuts down, awaken deep inside. Genocidal mutilation, the bodies start to rise. The stench of mortal massacre engulfs these mortal eyes. Anger, hate and misery locked away in my soul. The voice of reason starts to die as violence takes control. --CHORUS: RAAGGE!-- --Metamorphosis: The dark...side...hasbeencomplete!-- --Dehumanization: Compassion...lost...brokenhaloatmy****ingfeet!-- A bloodthirst like none before. From man to god, a new level I explore. And I scream at the moon, as my skin is peeling, AAAAAAHH! Can't fight the bleeding feeling. Bones snap, rip the flesh. Evolution at it's best.

08-20-2005, 06:54 PM	#2 (permalink)
riseagainstrocks Music Addict Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: DC Posts: 3,320	that first verse is actually pretty cool. in a way. reminds me of some Naglfar lyrics though... __________________ One note timeless, came out of nowhere...

08-22-2005, 09:14 PM	#3 (permalink)
phoenixflames Something That You're Not Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Cold And All Alone Posts: 475	Not my style as far as lyrical content goes, but it does at least use some good words and rhyme. Its so hard to judge music on lyrics alone, seems like they are usually always better with music. __________________ ----------- I'm the lead singer and bass player for the band The Ascent (And Decline) Of Terrion. Yay for me... We're from Ohio. Yay for us... www.theascentofterrion.com Be our friend on MySpace