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Ad Astra
Join Date: Jul 2006
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Good evening!
Thought I would pop in to link my latest track and get some feedback from you guys. It's admittedly not the best in the world, but I'm proud of it for the most part, considering the difficulty in working with folks across the seas. This is not completely my style, but the girl I'm working with fits these guitar parts so well, I feel like it would be a shame not to write the music in my head. So, a weird thing happened after the master, which kind of leads me to dislike something in the very beginning of the song....but, I won't point it out, I'll let you be the judge. Let me know what you think - still learning every day ![]() https://youtu.be/bqg6rBiRHAY __________________________________________________ ___________ LYRICS Life and loss Fear and the shame In my heart - the fault Is mine just the same Though I know it's wrong I've shouldered the blame I'd give my life up for you, oh But there's nothing I could do, no I believe, one day I'll find The reason you are gone I know I hope All this time I've held on to yesterday What we've shared Can never be taken away from me One more night Won't change how I feel today I'd bleed my heart out for you, oh There's nothing I wouldn't do, no I believe, one day I'll find A way to carry on I know I hope At least I'll try Hold me Give me strength to replace this Somehow pick up the pieces Of everything All the parts we're made of Scattered out like stars within a sky Of many shades of us Tell me Show me What it's like to believe when Faith is broken Give me your clarity Heal my eyes so I can see Your face Show me how to breathe again All the pain I'm feeling All the things I'm missing Lost myself along the way Now I've struggled to find meaning But you've shown me Helped me Taught me All I know Ohhh.... Tell me Which way to go Light and love Will both remain In my soul - the hope Is always the same I believe, and I will fight Even though I know you're gone I can't let you go |
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