Get a taste of me - prolly the worst song i've ever written..hah. (songs)

JeEeN1305 · 08-17-2005, 04:11 AM

You sit here and start **** with me
and tell me how theres nothing
no nothing in life i have to worry about
but sweets. you just dont see
what its like to be mee.

Get a taste of me and what im really about
no im not here to play and fool around
I've got buisness to take care of
and chores to be do
life fufilling accomplishments
which must get done.

My life is alive and running
no, not dead and boring
i've got things going on
that sometimes i just cant take
and worrying is over rated
because then nothing gets done.

Ive got tests and homework
and dying family
pets and people that must be feed
orders and complaints
and problems of my own

a sister whose life is slipping fast away
a friend whose dead that i never go to see
a mom and dad who hate my friends
and 8th grade drama that just doesnt end.

so worry is an understatemt you see
and nothing is never nothing
there is always gonna be something.
because theres never ever an end.

phoenixflames · 08-22-2005, 09:44 PM

I don't really know what to think about this song, because in spots in seems good, then in others it seems to get all Brittney Spears and whiney on me. Sometimes songs are better when you go into less detail (don't be generic though) and/or make things more conceptual and poetic. It makes the song more relatable to the listener.

08-17-2005, 04:11 AM	#1 (permalink)
JeEeN1305 Groupie Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: New York Posts: 18	Get a taste of me - prolly the worst song i've ever written..hah. You sit here and start **** with me and tell me how theres nothing no nothing in life i have to worry about but sweets. you just dont see what its like to be mee. Get a taste of me and what im really about no im not here to play and fool around I've got buisness to take care of and chores to be do life fufilling accomplishments which must get done. My life is alive and running no, not dead and boring i've got things going on that sometimes i just cant take and worrying is over rated because then nothing gets done. Ive got tests and homework and dying family pets and people that must be feed orders and complaints and problems of my own a sister whose life is slipping fast away a friend whose dead that i never go to see a mom and dad who hate my friends and 8th grade drama that just doesnt end. so worry is an understatemt you see and nothing is never nothing there is always gonna be something. because theres never ever an end. __________________ I'll keep you my dirty little secret. <3 Who has to know?

08-22-2005, 09:44 PM	#2 (permalink)
phoenixflames Something That You're Not Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Cold And All Alone Posts: 475	I don't really know what to think about this song, because in spots in seems good, then in others it seems to get all Brittney Spears and whiney on me. Sometimes songs are better when you go into less detail (don't be generic though) and/or make things more conceptual and poetic. It makes the song more relatable to the listener. __________________ ----------- I'm the lead singer and bass player for the band The Ascent (And Decline) Of Terrion. Yay for me... We're from Ohio. Yay for us... www.theascentofterrion.com Be our friend on MySpace