Best friends forever (heavy metal)

Angel3010 · 10-23-2017, 08:37 AM

Hi, I'd like some feedback regarding lyrics, and by that I mean have you felt any emotion while reading?

Walking 3x
Step by step
Walking

Every step
Just an echo
Every laugh
Just a lie
Turning back
Nothing to see
Ooooh it's a lonely road

Emerging from darkness
Not devil from hell
Not demons from abyss
Just apparitions of friends 2x
Friends I used to know 2x

Every step
Collapsing in it's beggining
Every laugh
Cracking silence
Embracing fog
Nothing to feel
Oooooh it's a lonely road

Emerging from darkness
Not devil from hell
Not demons from abyss
Just apparitions of friends 2x
Friends I used to know 2x

Feeling metal in my back
And it hurts like hell
Devil, demons or a friend
What difference does it make
When they all kill you while you're awake

**Janszoon** · 10-23-2017, 09:03 AM

Grindcore?

Angel3010 · 10-24-2017, 11:07 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Janszoon

Grindcore?

Not quite. When I think about it, I believe slower, softer vocals and instrumentals would be more evocative and would suit better.
You think lyrics would be better for grindcore? Not a fan to be honest of thar genre.

grindy · 10-24-2017, 12:22 PM

Are you a pirate?

Angel3010 · 10-25-2017, 09:20 AM

What sense does that question even have lol

The Batlord · 10-25-2017, 09:26 AM

Tbh if your title can be turned into "BFFs" then maybe you should change it.

grindy · 10-25-2017, 01:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Angel3010

What sense does that question even have lol

The "thar" made me think that.

Angel3010 · 10-29-2017, 07:37 AM

Oh that lol
Yes you got me there mate, I am one-eyed somalian pirat with parrot on a shoulder

And yes, bff seems like a better name. It is certainly not something you'd expect when you hear the name of song lol

10-23-2017, 08:37 AM	#1 (permalink)
Angel3010 Groupie Join Date: Dec 2015 Posts: 39	Best friends forever (heavy metal) Hi, I'd like some feedback regarding lyrics, and by that I mean have you felt any emotion while reading? Walking 3x Step by step Walking Every step Just an echo Every laugh Just a lie Turning back Nothing to see Ooooh it's a lonely road Emerging from darkness Not devil from hell Not demons from abyss Just apparitions of friends 2x Friends I used to know 2x Every step Collapsing in it's beggining Every laugh Cracking silence Embracing fog Nothing to feel Oooooh it's a lonely road Emerging from darkness Not devil from hell Not demons from abyss Just apparitions of friends 2x Friends I used to know 2x Feeling metal in my back And it hurts like hell Devil, demons or a friend What difference does it make When they all kill you while you're awake

10-23-2017, 09:03 AM	#2 (permalink)
Janszoon Mate, Spawn & Die Join Date: May 2007 Location: The Rapping Community Posts: 24,593	Grindcore? __________________ A Night in the Life of the Invisible Man Time & Place 25 Albums You Should Hear Before the Moon Crashes into the Earth and We All Die last.fm

10-24-2017, 12:22 PM	#4 (permalink)
grindy . Join Date: Oct 2014 Location: . Posts: 7,201	Are you a pirate? __________________ *A smell of petroleum prevails throughout.*

10-25-2017, 09:20 AM	#5 (permalink)
Angel3010 Groupie Join Date: Dec 2015 Posts: 39	What sense does that question even have lol

10-29-2017, 07:37 AM	#8 (permalink)
Angel3010 Groupie Join Date: Dec 2015 Posts: 39	Oh that lol Yes you got me there mate, I am one-eyed somalian pirat with parrot on a shoulder And yes, bff seems like a better name. It is certainly not something you'd expect when you hear the name of song lol