Best friends forever (heavy metal)

[Angel3010]

Hi, I'd like some feedback regarding lyrics, and by that I mean have you felt any emotion while reading?

Walking 3x
Step by step
Walking

Every step
Just an echo
Every laugh
Just a lie
Turning back
Nothing to see
Ooooh it's a lonely road

Emerging from darkness
Not devil from hell
Not demons from abyss
Just apparitions of friends 2x
Friends I used to know 2x

Every step
Collapsing in it's beggining
Every laugh
Cracking silence
Embracing fog
Nothing to feel
Oooooh it's a lonely road

Emerging from darkness
Not devil from hell
Not demons from abyss
Just apparitions of friends 2x
Friends I used to know 2x

Feeling metal in my back
And it hurts like hell
Devil, demons or a friend
What difference does it make
When they all kill you while you're awake