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08-08-2005, 04:09 PM | #1 (permalink) |
Groupie
Join Date: Aug 2005
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Different Brand
Again, Feedback greatly appreciated.
It’s automatic, rhythmatic, and superstatic It’s what makes you get off of your feet with no beat It’s the rhythm it’s the groove that makes you want to move It’s the boogie its how to be now listen and you’ll see The music takes you back, feeling a surprise attack Dealing it hard, keeping strong, and bringing it raw Busting through keeping true come on, and listen to Me, pump the beat, look, your bouncing in you seat Now you wonder why I’m singing the swinging, nice and cool And yet you’re listen to me rhyming and you know that I rule Cause its coming back to get you double trouble take a stand It’s me yea believe that I’m a different brand Now I flow how I like and I like how I flow You’re hearing me from Canada down to Puerto Rico They’re like, “Hey, Que tal, hombre caliente.” “I’d just like to know how you doing, eh?” Wild freestyle, driving straight through the 8th mile Hitting it up, then going right down to the pile Picking up the mic, then dropping it like its hooooooot Original rhymes, you know that’s its nooot The usual unusual delusional and critical critic All the clinical cynics that are still in it For all those out there searching for a voice or a band Look no further, because you’ve found a different brand Now you wonder why I’m singing the swinging, nice and cool And yet you’re listen to me rhyming and you know that I rule Cause its coming back to get you double trouble take a stand It’s me yea believe that I’m a different brand So stop. Hip hop. Take a step, step aside, get ready for the ride of your life It’s the time of your life, the greatest thing you will hear, and listen….. ‘cause it’s near It’s everything you wanted it’s everything you had What you thought was gone was right next to you and it aint half bad You’ve found your soul, your musical originality Steppin’ to your own world, shot from reality It’s a travesty once you realize how good you can be Even better than the best of the best, your majesty You’re finding out it aint so bad being new and not bland Once you’ve found your very own different brand Now you wonder why I’m singing the swinging, nice and cool And yet you’re listen to me rhyming and you know that I rule Cause its coming back to get you double trouble take a stand It’s me yea believe that I’m different, Now you wonder why I’m singing the swinging, nice and cool And yet you’re listen to me rhyming and you know that I rule Cause its coming back to get you double trouble take a stand It’s me yea believe that I’m a different brand Hopefully better than the last, Skuroccer9 P.S. Feedback, or at least reading throug and admiring, greatly appreciated. |
08-09-2005, 08:37 PM | #6 (permalink) |
killedmyraindog
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its got the arrogant bravado of rap. and im not feeling that.
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08-09-2005, 11:27 PM | #8 (permalink) | |
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08-10-2005, 08:18 PM | #9 (permalink) |
killedmyraindog
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its too "look how ****ing awesome I am." Your songs seem to focus on you alot. try, if only for the reading public, writing about an event, and make it one that didn't paticipate in.
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08-17-2005, 07:15 PM | #10 (permalink) |
Groupie
Join Date: Aug 2005
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that sounds a lot like jason mraz
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