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Old 08-22-2005, 09:32 PM   #11 (permalink)
Something That You're Not
 
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Lacks substance and is c0cky (something I despise in life). What is the song even about? I realize that this probably took some time to write, so keep up the dedication and try again. Maybe in the future you should think about writing something that tells a story, or gives the listener something to relate to.
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