Oppressive Awakening

Stockholm · 02-26-2017, 07:19 AM

Life is a trade-off
In the quest for peace
Of mind of matter
Of beauty of beast

The longer the time
entrenched in mind
The pain so intense
Frustration immense

Don't smile on me sun
You know not my heart
The shattered glass
Which rips me apart

As I walk alone
And hold off defeat
Know of my struggle
As I know your heat

The last five versus available upon request.

OccultHawk · 02-26-2017, 07:47 AM

The last stanza there is pretty darn good.

Stockholm · 02-26-2017, 09:09 AM

I wrote in in my mind while walking the streets in the blazing sun. I finished it with the final five verses but am a bit paranoid in sharing it on line without a copyright. Perhaps I'll find my way here.

02-26-2017, 07:19 AM	#1 (permalink)
Stockholm Groupie Join Date: Feb 2017 Posts: 30	Oppressive Awakening Life is a trade-off In the quest for peace Of mind of matter Of beauty of beast The longer the time entrenched in mind The pain so intense Frustration immense Don't smile on me sun You know not my heart The shattered glass Which rips me apart As I walk alone And hold off defeat Know of my struggle As I know your heat The last five versus available upon request.

02-26-2017, 09:09 AM	#3 (permalink)
Stockholm Groupie Join Date: Feb 2017 Posts: 30	Thanks! I wrote in in my mind while walking the streets in the blazing sun. I finished it with the final five verses but am a bit paranoid in sharing it on line without a copyright. Perhaps I'll find my way here.

02-26-2017, 07:47 AM	#2 (permalink)
OccultHawk one-balled nipple jockey Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: Dirty Souf Biatch Posts: 22,006	The last stanza there is pretty darn good.