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Old 06-17-2016, 12:07 AM   #21 (permalink)
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Old 06-17-2016, 01:08 AM   #22 (permalink)
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Lol... jeez.. this is rediculious... you guys live to be difficult eh? Seems like the entire 9 lines, though very easy to comprehend is beyond you? Why do people read so hard? Its right infront of you... Anyhow.. this very poem has won awards.. I am the soul owner, there is quite a bit more. Maybe try looking outside the box a bit.
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Old 06-17-2016, 01:30 AM   #23 (permalink)
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You begged us for criticism. I delivered.

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Old 06-17-2016, 01:31 AM   #24 (permalink)
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Seems like the entire 9 lines, though very easy to comprehend is beyond you?
Oh, I get the meaning. It's just that the meaning isn't worth the getting.
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Old 06-17-2016, 01:36 AM   #25 (permalink)
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You did.. lol. We're all just joking around here anyhow..
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Old 06-17-2016, 01:53 AM   #26 (permalink)
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Lol... jeez.. this is rediculious... you guys live to be difficult eh?
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Old 06-17-2016, 02:02 AM   #28 (permalink)
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Old 06-17-2016, 07:44 PM   #30 (permalink)
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Lol... jeez.. this is rediculious... you guys live to be difficult eh? Seems like the entire 9 lines, though very easy to comprehend is beyond you? Why do people read so hard? Its right infront of you... Anyhow.. this very poem has won awards.. I am the soul owner, there is quite a bit more. Maybe try looking outside the box a bit.
Do people usually ask for criticism of poems that have already won awards?
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