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Kedvesem 06-16-2016 11:07 PM
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Originally Posted by mordwyr (Post 1711043)
That's what she said.
:clap:

WhyBanhammer 06-17-2016 12:08 AM
Lol... jeez.. this is rediculious... you guys live to be difficult eh? Seems like the entire 9 lines, though very easy to comprehend is beyond you? Why do people read so hard? Its right infront of you... Anyhow.. this very poem has won awards.. I am the soul owner, there is quite a bit more. Maybe try looking outside the box a bit.

Zhanteimi 06-17-2016 12:30 AM
You begged us for criticism. I delivered.

Quote:
Originally Posted by WhyBanhammer (Post 1711050)
I am the soul owner.
Satan, is that you?

Kedvesem 06-17-2016 12:31 AM
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Originally Posted by WhyBanhammer (Post 1711050)
Seems like the entire 9 lines, though very easy to comprehend is beyond you?
Oh, I get the meaning. It's just that the meaning isn't worth the getting.

WhyBanhammer 06-17-2016 12:36 AM
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Originally Posted by mordwyr (Post 1711051)
You begged us for criticism. I delivered.



Satan, is that you?
You did.. lol. We're all just joking around here anyhow..

Stephen 06-17-2016 12:53 AM
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Originally Posted by WhyBanhammer (Post 1711050)
Lol... jeez.. this is rediculious... you guys live to be difficult eh?
Nailed it. Welcome to MB. :bonkhead:

WhyBanhammer 06-17-2016 01:01 AM
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Originally Posted by Stephen (Post 1711054)
Nailed it. Welcome to MB. :bonkhead:
Thanks brother.

Zhanteimi 06-17-2016 01:02 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Stephen (Post 1711054)
Nailed it. Welcome to MB. :bonkhead:
Indeed. Welcome, WhyBanhammer! :)

WhyBanhammer 06-17-2016 04:21 PM
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Originally Posted by mordwyr (Post 1711056)
Indeed. Welcome, WhyBanhammer! :)
Thanks, glad to be here

DeadChannel 06-17-2016 06:44 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by WhyBanhammer (Post 1711050)
Lol... jeez.. this is rediculious... you guys live to be difficult eh? Seems like the entire 9 lines, though very easy to comprehend is beyond you? Why do people read so hard? Its right infront of you... Anyhow.. this very poem has won awards.. I am the soul owner, there is quite a bit more. Maybe try looking outside the box a bit.
Do people usually ask for criticism of poems that have already won awards?


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