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02-19-2016, 02:41 PM | #1 (permalink) |
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Join Date: Feb 2009
Posts: 7
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what I think is free-verse
and love?...
Dry your eyes passing stranger, some minutes have filled a life. The rivers that cut and mark these souls, have hardened a diamond finish. Hours that pass, brief encounters If She knew..."the innocent beauty, would She weep the missed embrace...Vincent ====================== stuff about "Rain" Come closer, do you think of me in your Winter rains, grays touch the ocean. Come sit, my hands are warm merely empty. I reminisce, incidental moments remind me....you too? the paths we walked are the same I`m sure, void of our impressions. Do you think of me when the rains fall? it`s been so long... Well better go, rain is passing. Thought you might like to know I think of you.. Rain is that way sometimes. "question my abilities..never my heart" © Copyright 2015 Lane Vincent =============== The wood has grayed many years of weather, fighting Winter, July boils, and the rain. Comfort on the old back-steps twisted some, but sturdy. Dark clouds move across lighter shades, or is it the world moving around charcoal splashes. Rain..doesn`t it seem searing at times. I fought the day to bring me here, the cold minutes spent alone... no one to watch the rain. "question my abilities..never my heart" © Copyright 2011 Vincent hey all i`m doing this song and just want thoughts on the verse..what might lead into this "chorus. its a bit country and if you need to hear something I can do that too. I`ll write the damn thing just need a push...a driction..thanks if you get here. Lane the "Chorus you take every little heartache you have ever had.. and then you stir in a life with love thats gone bad.. and all the little pieces that did not fit....ooooh theres a man/girl with regret " [some mis-spelling its intentional] |
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