Angel3010

I'm about to make my first song called On the floor. I'd love to hear some feedback.

ON THE FLOOR

Lying on the floor
Looking up above
I imagine how does sky look like
Chained to the past
Unable to move
I imagine how does sky look like

And when night falls
I hear desperate calls
Of ones I used to know
Heroes that I saw

(chorus)
Dancing on the floor
Wanting more and more
Embrace shadows
Standing all alone
Stage is gone
Embrace shadows
Dancing on the floor
Losing more and more

Faking all the joy
Dreaming all the time
I imagine how does sky look like
Locked in a room
Wrongly understood
I imagine how does sky look like

Like puppet on the strings
With broken wings
I look for better days
On unexplored ways

(chorus x2)
Dancing on the floor
Wanting more and more
Embrace shadows
Standing all alone
Stage is gone
Embrace shadows
Dancing on the floor
Losing more and more