need support with this lyrics

ciprian · 12-13-2015, 02:09 PM

hi,is there anyone willing to help me finish this song?
i'm kinda stuck and could use a litlle support

It’s complicated

Will not let the tears free cause ,
My mask will melt down,
You must not see who is under it.
Can not speak
Cause You might know what I think,
And can not move
Cause then you’l know what I feel
Will not,can not,wont’t let you see what’s real
So I’ll pretend to be this person ,me.

NathanTMusic · 01-10-2016, 07:46 PM

What kind of support do you need? I write music and I'm not as well versed in lyrics (pun not intended). What I do know is this, music always follows some kind of rhythm and the lyrics conforms to it, or vice versa.

mr.mick · 01-18-2016, 07:30 PM

yeah what is the help you're wanting?

**Exo** · 01-18-2016, 07:54 PM

Do you want us to write the end of the song for you?

**Frownland** · 01-19-2016, 10:44 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ciprian

hi,is there anyone willing to help me finish this song?
i'm kinda stuck and could use a litlle support

It’s complicated

Will not let the tears free cause ,
My mask will melt down,
You must not see who is under it.
Can not speak
Cause You might know what I think,
And can not move
Cause then you’l know what I feel
Will not,can not,wont’t let you see what’s real
So I’ll pretend to be this person ,me.

La la la la la la doot doot do do do
Love you baby oh oh oh
But I'm sad and complicay-ee-ay-ee-ated
Woah oh oh oh woah oh
*sultry saxophone solo*
La la la do doot doo it's complicated

Angel3010 · 01-19-2016, 11:02 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Frownland

La la la la la la doot doot do do do
Love you baby oh oh oh
But I'm sad and complicay-ee-ay-ee-ated
Woah oh oh oh woah oh
*sultry saxophone solo*
La la la do doot doo it's complicated

that sure is deep as hell

Lane1777 · 02-19-2016, 12:34 PM

I would try but the lyric here looks a little to personal to me. might be a better idea to finish it yourself, and it might take some time but I re-write songs I`ve had for years... little bits and pieces lay around till I think on them or go back and pick them up again..that's the truth.

12-13-2015, 02:09 PM	#1 (permalink)
ciprian Groupie Join Date: Dec 2015 Posts: 1	need support with this lyrics hi,is there anyone willing to help me finish this song? i'm kinda stuck and could use a litlle support It’s complicated Will not let the tears free cause , My mask will melt down, You must not see who is under it. Can not speak Cause You might know what I think, And can not move Cause then you’l know what I feel Will not,can not,wont’t let you see what’s real So I’ll pretend to be this person ,me.

01-18-2016, 07:54 PM	#4 (permalink)
Exo All day jazz and biscuits Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: NJ Posts: 7,354	Do you want us to write the end of the song for you? __________________ LastFM SUPREME POO BAH MODERATOR EXTRAORDINAIRE

01-10-2016, 07:46 PM	#2 (permalink)
NathanTMusic Groupie Join Date: Jan 2016 Posts: 5	What kind of support do you need? I write music and I'm not as well versed in lyrics (pun not intended). What I do know is this, music always follows some kind of rhythm and the lyrics conforms to it, or vice versa.

01-18-2016, 07:30 PM	#3 (permalink)
mr.mick Groupie Join Date: Jan 2016 Posts: 6	yeah what is the help you're wanting?

02-19-2016, 12:34 PM	#7 (permalink)
Lane1777 Groupie Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 7	I would try but the lyric here looks a little to personal to me. might be a better idea to finish it yourself, and it might take some time but I re-write songs I`ve had for years... little bits and pieces lay around till I think on them or go back and pick them up again..that's the truth.