this is a direct reference to that person (quote, talent)

riseagainstrocks · 07-22-2005, 02:17 PM

This is a direct refrence to that person

i watched him ascend and then turned to run. the monster latching on to the cancer. these couplings of a fatality are nothing if we let them fester and die. but we didn't. feeding on our fears and stealing all we built with swollen hands. who can deny that this really is out fault. you couldn’t see the forest for the trees and i guess we all fell pray to that line of thought. we died on his altar and still he demanded more. when can we exist if there is no more today? fight against him, this beast. this killer. exhume the spirits of my dead ancestors. reveal our final assault. pray that this works. and in time, we shall prevail.

a little different than normal for me but change is good.

TheBig3 · 07-30-2005, 02:50 PM

What format is this in Rise?

HighHopes · 08-01-2005, 07:06 PM

Well thats just tripe..dont even bother continuing to write anything..ever...you should just shoot yourself actually...
Naah thats totally harsh but it was rather rubbish..you could do better..well actually I dont know if you could but I really do hope you could cos come on...that sucked!

riseagainstrocks · 08-05-2005, 07:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TheBig3KilledMyRainDog

What format is this in Rise?

spoken word over drums.

an interlude in a live set.

riseagainstrocks · 08-05-2005, 07:18 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by HighHopes

Well thats just tripe..dont even bother continuing to write anything..ever...you should just shoot yourself actually...
Naah thats totally harsh but it was rather rubbish..you could do better..well actually I dont know if you could but I really do hope you could cos come on...that sucked!

any suggestions?

i guess i should have said the format at first.

and i have several songs on this board. unlike most people who post their work here i attempt to write in different styles even if i'm not comfortable in them. It furthers my skills. This might not be one that i'm great in, but at least i try and push myself.

IamAlejo · 08-06-2005, 03:36 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by HighHopes

Well thats just tripe..dont even bother continuing to write anything..ever...you should just shoot yourself actually...
Naah thats totally harsh but it was rather rubbish..you could do better..well actually I dont know if you could but I really do hope you could cos come on...that sucked!

Amazing you say that about one of the better writers here. Sad thing is, I checked, and failed to see any of your writing posted on the boards. Probably because you lack the skill, creativity, and talent to write anything that is somewhat coherant and has any meaning at all.

07-22-2005, 02:17 PM	#1 (permalink)
riseagainstrocks Music Addict Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: DC Posts: 3,320	this is a direct reference to that person This is a direct refrence to that person i watched him ascend and then turned to run. the monster latching on to the cancer. these couplings of a fatality are nothing if we let them fester and die. but we didn't. feeding on our fears and stealing all we built with swollen hands. who can deny that this really is out fault. you couldn’t see the forest for the trees and i guess we all fell pray to that line of thought. we died on his altar and still he demanded more. when can we exist if there is no more today? fight against him, this beast. this killer. exhume the spirits of my dead ancestors. reveal our final assault. pray that this works. and in time, we shall prevail. a little different than normal for me but change is good. __________________ One note timeless, came out of nowhere...

07-30-2005, 02:50 PM	#2 (permalink)
TheBig3 killedmyraindog Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Boston, Massachusetts Posts: 11,172	What format is this in Rise? __________________ I've moved to a new address

08-01-2005, 07:06 PM	#3 (permalink)
HighHopes Groupie Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 4	Well thats just tripe..dont even bother continuing to write anything..ever...you should just shoot yourself actually... Naah thats totally harsh but it was rather rubbish..you could do better..well actually I dont know if you could but I really do hope you could cos come on...that sucked!