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05-28-2015, 07:45 PM
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Join Date: May 2015
Posts: 2
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Please rate my first song!
Any constructive critisism would be great, maybe it's a little long, but it's a pretty fast moving song
Titled: Light At the End of the Tunnel (Think) Hello again, it's been a while, But I still remember your smile and It seems like yesterday, I was asking you to stay But now you're gone, and on and on my heart goes Trying to fill the gaping hole you made You're the light at the end of my tunnel The deepest dark place for me You're my bail out when I'm in trouble I just need you next to me Cuz when you're gone I get distracted My feelings go radioactive Cuz you're my light at the end of my tunnel And I need you next to me My heart goes on and on Reminding me of times gone by And maybe it was telling me, all along, a little lie Did you really care? Or was it all inside my head Please explain to me, or I might as well be dead Think of all the memories, think of all the times Think of all times when your eyes met mine Think of all those words you said, think of my replies Think of those emotions we pushed down the well to die Think of all the dreams we shared, think of how they went Think of how we tried to make a compromise to send Think of all the plans we made, now those are key And above all, please please think of me Don't forget to think of me I will always think of you Cuz you're the light at the end of my tunnel The deepest dark place for me You're my bail out when I'm in trouble I just need you next to me Cuz when you're gone I get distracted My feelings go radioactive Cuz you're my light at the end of my tunnel And I need you next to me There are plenty of rubies on my left side, emeralds on my right Men carry their own gem, they won't give up without a fight I know I want one, and I reach out, then a thought hits me with a shout The cave's illuminated at the exit, by a diamond the size of my fist. I just Need to wait, wait for it to come Sacrifice my present happiness for future sum It will all be worth it, worth it in the end I just hope it gets the cheesy letters I send Think of all the memories, think of all the times Think of all times when your eyes met mine Think of all those words you said, think of my replies Think of those emotions we pushed down the well to die Think of all the dreams we shared, think of how they went Think of how we tried to make a compromise to send Think of all the plans we made, now those are key And above all, please please think of me Don't forget to think of me I will always think of you Cuz you're the light at the end of my tunnel The deepest dark place for me You're my bail out when I'm in trouble I just need you next to me Cuz when you're gone I get distracted My feelings go radioactive Cuz you're my light at the end of my tunnel And I need you next to me So give me your all, show me how you ball, If we make it or not is your call I'm as loyal as a dog, I will be there, it's up to you to decide how we fare Will we make it? Or will we fall? I promise I will stand tall Don't pull me down, I will not frown, if we make it through I'll give you a crown Think of all the memories, think of all the times Think of all times when your eyes met mine Think of all those words you said, think of my replies Think of those emotions we pushed down the well to die Think of all the dreams we shared, think of how they went Think of how we tried to make a compromise to send Think of all the plans we made, now those are key And above all, please please think of me Don't forget to think of me I will always think of you Cuz you're the light at the end of my tunnel The deepest dark place for me You're my bail out when I'm in trouble I just need you next to me Cuz when you're gone I get distracted My feelings go radioactive Cuz you're the light at the end of my tunnel And I need you next to me You're the light at the end of my tunnel from you ill never be free You're the light at the end of my tunnel That's how I want it to be You're the light at the end of my tunnel I need you next to me |
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06-02-2015, 08:52 AM
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Groupie
Join Date: May 2015
Posts: 2
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Go for it
I'm away from all instruments for the the rest of the summer, and fruity loops is being bratty, so I wouldn't be able to hear it come to fruition. But I'm interested how you use them! Send me the song when you're done!
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