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07-16-2005, 11:53 AM | #1 (permalink) |
Groupie
Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: Dirty South, Marrero/New Orleans. LA
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WAS IT WORTH IT- another one-what cha think?
WAS IT WORTH IT? When ya came out the womb. 2 go through what cha go through, till ya buried in ya tomb. WAS IT WORTH IT? When ya called that man a h***y or n*gg**r. And he re-taliated useing his fist or the trigger. WAS IT WORTH IT? 2 give that hooker some wise and healthy advice. And Re-neg on what cha said, and stayed with her for the night. TELL ME WAS IT WORTH IT? When ya tried to help ya sister or ya brothers. And the slap, you got in return, was harder than ya mothers'. WAS IT WORTH IT? 2 help a friend out of a domestic dispute. And they keep entering the lions cage, with the same old excuse. C'MON TELL ME WAS IT WORTH IT? 2 throw that baby in the trash. Only to paint a picture in ya mind of a painful past. WAS IT WORTH IT? 2 punch that kid in the nose. And go to jail for something stupid as jacking some clothes. I GOT'Z 2 KNOW WAS IT WORTH IT? 2 steal the money---ya stole today. maybe somebodies last, now the kidz are starvin- ya having a good day? WAS IT WORTH IT? 2 listen 2 so many peoples problems. And stress ya self out, trying to help solve em. WAS IT WORTH IT? Hearing----n---seeing--daily complications. Like looking 4 work-filling out the same old applications. BOTTOM LINE----- We all want the best, but may not deserve it. So we twist things up- some of yall call it curving it. but no matter what island -u- choose 2 stay on, go head reserve it. You can only ask ya-self, 4 everything i went through in my life-------- WAS IT WORTH IT? IF YES THEN===== IF NOT THEN==== JUST A LITTLE HUMOR. BUT LET ME KNOW WHAT CHA THINK AIGHT AS ALWAYS GOD BLESS |
07-27-2005, 03:49 PM | #5 (permalink) | |
The Erroneous Hoodlum
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: West Side Phoenix
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i dont think they do RAR, i just think the songwriting thread doesnt get alot of attention, ive got a few songs written in the forum that have dozens of views with no posts too.
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07-28-2005, 07:57 PM | #6 (permalink) |
killedmyraindog
Join Date: Aug 2004
Location: Boston, Massachusetts
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I did a few lines but I can only read things like 2= two/too/to for so long before I go crazy. Seemed good though, songs life this can come off as too preachy sometimes and maybe it did, I don't know. Asking life philosophy questions (to me) is the songs that freshman in highschool put up in away messages and use as yearbook quotes.
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