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07-15-2005, 04:00 PM | #1 (permalink) |
Groupie
Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: Dirty South, Marrero/New Orleans. LA
Posts: 22
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IT HURTS tell me what cha think please?
IT HURTS
VERSE 1 IT HURTS Young homie, when ya fall off ya skate board. Or when ya cost ya team the game-n-don't settle the score. IT HURTS Baby girl, when ya fall off ya bike. Or you can have everything, that u want and like. IT HURTS 2 Keep all ya emotions balled up inside. And all ya life you've been decieved and fed nothing but lies. IT HURTS When ya work 8hrs + on ya feet And ya hustle to pay ya bills-n-4 ya kidz to eat. IT HURTS Everytime ya turn on ya T.V. And ya still see our soldiers dying over seas. I KNOW IT HURTS When ya see a relationship, on the rocks and fall apart. or a close knit family-removed like a weakend heart. YEAH IT HURTS When ya dough is low-n-you don't have no food. Ya so called friends-n-neighbors-turn their backs and act a fool. -N- LORD IT HURTS At night-when ya alone and you wallow and cry. The burning sensation, while ya rub, come 2 ya eyes. -N- STILL IT HURTS When ya lose ----the one ya love. Personally, i miss my Mom- cause she was my dove. I KNOW IT HURTS When ya feel like ya talkin 2 ya-self. Spilled Literature, wasted and placed on the shelf. YA KNOW IT HURTS When ya feel you have nothing left. All ya choices-n-decisions and pains all you kept. I wrote these pages straight from my heart. there's 2 much going on, so i try to make a new start. 2 much pains benn rolling-taped-yeah recorded. I'm bringing some love here, cause it has departed. And that's the way Mr Slogan plans to bring peace. This is to connect with an audience-that like me has felt grief. yall holla and keep it real tell me what cha think? God Bless |
07-15-2005, 04:07 PM | #2 (permalink) |
The Erroneous Hoodlum
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: West Side Phoenix
Posts: 2,057
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that ****s well written. What style are you going for? cuz when i read it, it sounds very transplant/op-ivy influenced.
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07-16-2005, 01:55 AM | #6 (permalink) | |
ghettochik
Join Date: Jul 2005
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thats sick man, keep it up yo |
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