Facade

bearheart · 02-10-2015, 11:36 PM

would love to hear feedback!!

Facade

Stroke my ego, let me loose
Put my neck right through the noose
Hard times coming down that road
Better get ready let's lock & load
Mouth full of lead with a head full of pain
No more dread for the man insane
Woah, oh help us god & save our souls

Black sheep rising to the blood moon dying
Dancing with the devil in the pale moonlight
Can you hear, hear them crying
Children of the damned coming to fight
Woah, oh help us god & save our souls

There's a boy in the back ready to attack
Mighty with the pen never know where he's been
Harsh with his words but everything hurts
This is his claim to fame
Selling his soul & changing his name
Woah, oh help us god & save our souls

One foot ahead with another in the grave
Can't look back, can't be saved
Bury me down next to my kin
Fly me to heaven never seen again
Woah, oh tell me god is it all a facade

angelgirl · 02-25-2015, 09:07 AM

Hi! I've noticed that you repeat the last line of every verse. is this a song or a poem? It reads a little like a song too but can't be sure.

02-10-2015, 11:36 PM	#1 (permalink)
bearheart Groupie Join Date: Feb 2015 Posts: 2	Facade would love to hear feedback!! Facade Stroke my ego, let me loose Put my neck right through the noose Hard times coming down that road Better get ready let's lock & load Mouth full of lead with a head full of pain No more dread for the man insane Woah, oh help us god & save our souls Black sheep rising to the blood moon dying Dancing with the devil in the pale moonlight Can you hear, hear them crying Children of the damned coming to fight Woah, oh help us god & save our souls There's a boy in the back ready to attack Mighty with the pen never know where he's been Harsh with his words but everything hurts This is his claim to fame Selling his soul & changing his name Woah, oh help us god & save our souls One foot ahead with another in the grave Can't look back, can't be saved Bury me down next to my kin Fly me to heaven never seen again Woah, oh tell me god is it all a facade Last edited by bearheart; 02-11-2015 at 12:01 AM.

02-25-2015, 09:07 AM	#2 (permalink)
angelgirl Groupie Join Date: Feb 2015 Posts: 16	Hi! I've noticed that you repeat the last line of every verse. is this a song or a poem? It reads a little like a song too but can't be sure.