Facade
 

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Facade

Stroke my ego, let me loose
Put my neck right through the noose
Hard times coming down that road
Better get ready let's lock & load
Mouth full of lead with a head full of pain
No more dread for the man insane
Woah, oh help us god & save our souls

Black sheep rising to the blood moon dying
Dancing with the devil in the pale moonlight
Can you hear, hear them crying
Children of the damned coming to fight
Woah, oh help us god & save our souls

There's a boy in the back ready to attack
Mighty with the pen never know where he's been
Harsh with his words but everything hurts
This is his claim to fame
Selling his soul & changing his name
Woah, oh help us god & save our souls

One foot ahead with another in the grave
Can't look back, can't be saved
Bury me down next to my kin
Fly me to heaven never seen again
Woah, oh tell me god is it all a facade

Hi! I've noticed that you repeat the last line of every verse. is this a song or a poem? It reads a little like a song too but can't be sure.