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Old 01-12-2015, 02:10 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Deafening

Thanks for checking out my post. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. Just for clarification, everything in parentheses would be background vocals. Enjoy!


(Shhhhh...)
...It seems like every sound is so subdued,
Since you went away,
Wishing just for silence,
How heavy silence weigh.

(Shhhhh...)
...It was all the things I said,
You don't wanna hear them any more,
It was all the things I did,
Then you pushed me out he door.

[Chorus]
(Shhhhh...)
...It's now only silence
(Shhhhh...)
...It's the wall that blocks it out,
(Shhhhh...)
...It's another day, I add more bricks,
(Shhhhhhh...)
...It keeps out silence that you shout.

(Shhhhh...)
...It makes my muscle atrophy,
It can't grow anymore,
Confined to this cell I built,
Happiness is a chore.

(Shhhhh...)
...It's all just so deafening,
The silence is all I hear,
Every word that you don't speak,
The silence is crystal clear

(Shhhhh......it)

[Chorus]
(Shhhhh...)
...It's now only silence
(Shhhhh...)
...It's the wall that blocks it out,
(Shhhhh...)
...It's another day, I add more bricks,
(Shhhhhhh...)
...It keeps out silence that you shout.

I don't want to hear your silence anymore

(Shhhhh.....)
...It is now only silence
(Shhhhh...)
...It's the wall that blocks it out,
(Shhhhh...)
...It's another day and I add more bricks,
(Shhhhh...)
...It keeps out silence that you shout.

I don't want to hear your silence any more

(Shhhhh......it)
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