Targets. (It's based on a true story and is quite sad...) (song)

_The_Repeats_ · 07-08-2005, 06:50 AM

Another target to reach.
Another opportunity to leech.
Another way to kill the beach.
Another way to limit speech.

Is it all how you planned,
or has it all gone down the pan?

Another mouth to feed.
Another march to lead.
Another call to heed.
Another trash novel to sit and read.

Are you not fullfilled,
two kids and a wife?

You got there on your own,
through networking.

It's a pity you died so young.
You really died.

It really happened.
You really died.

angel18 · 07-12-2005, 12:28 PM

that's good but what is the meaning of the song or poem?

_The_Repeats_ · 07-12-2005, 03:31 PM

It's a song and it's about a young man with a family who kills himself. I can't really tell you the whole story because my mum's friend who told me it is a social worker, and it's confidential or whatever. 'Tis sad though, do you not think? Seeing as he had two kids and all.

angel18 · 07-13-2005, 08:06 AM

well yeah it is. i just couldnt figure out what it was about thats all. i'd hate to be that man in the song.

07-13-2005, 09:27 AM

that networking line didnt fit for me.... otherwise i like it

_The_Repeats_ · 07-13-2005, 09:29 AM

That's what I always think when I read it, but then when it's played with music it really does. I think I have a rough recording somewhere, if you wanted to hear it?

07-13-2005, 09:30 AM

yeah, put up a link... id like to hear how it sounds.......

_The_Repeats_ · 07-13-2005, 09:45 AM

Put up a li...nk? Sorry, I'm not that clever. How do you do that?

07-13-2005, 09:46 AM

heh heh.... i thought you meant you had it on a web page or something... tis k... im sure its sounds good......

EDIT: unless you can zip it then upload it onto here... dont know how big it could be though.....

_The_Repeats_ · 07-13-2005, 01:20 PM

Oki doke, don't have a clue what you're talking about...but thanks!

07-08-2005, 06:50 AM	#1 (permalink)
_The_Repeats_ Music Addict Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Oxford. Woo yeah. Ehem. Posts: 58	Targets. (It's based on a true story and is quite sad...) Another target to reach. Another opportunity to leech. Another way to kill the beach. Another way to limit speech. Is it all how you planned, or has it all gone down the pan? Another mouth to feed. Another march to lead. Another call to heed. Another trash novel to sit and read. Are you not fullfilled, two kids and a wife? You got there on your own, through networking. It's a pity you died so young. You really died. It really happened. You really died. __________________ I never wanted to love you, but that's okay... I always knew that you'd leave me anyway. You're treading on awfully thin ice darling, it's so awfully thin. It's almost turning to water, as we speak. *~~#You.Are.Too.Far.Gone.^'\|\|¬.

07-12-2005, 03:31 PM	#3 (permalink)
_The_Repeats_ Music Addict Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Oxford. Woo yeah. Ehem. Posts: 58	It's a song and it's about a young man with a family who kills himself. I can't really tell you the whole story because my mum's friend who told me it is a social worker, and it's confidential or whatever. 'Tis sad though, do you not think? Seeing as he had two kids and all. __________________ I never wanted to love you, but that's okay... I always knew that you'd leave me anyway. You're treading on awfully thin ice darling, it's so awfully thin. It's almost turning to water, as we speak. *~~#You.Are.Too.Far.Gone.^'\|\|¬.

07-13-2005, 09:29 AM	#6 (permalink)
_The_Repeats_ Music Addict Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Oxford. Woo yeah. Ehem. Posts: 58	That's what I always think when I read it, but then when it's played with music it really does. I think I have a rough recording somewhere, if you wanted to hear it? __________________ I never wanted to love you, but that's okay... I always knew that you'd leave me anyway. You're treading on awfully thin ice darling, it's so awfully thin. It's almost turning to water, as we speak. *~~#You.Are.Too.Far.Gone.^'\|\|¬.

07-13-2005, 09:45 AM	#8 (permalink)
_The_Repeats_ Music Addict Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Oxford. Woo yeah. Ehem. Posts: 58	Put up a li...nk? Sorry, I'm not that clever. How do you do that? __________________ I never wanted to love you, but that's okay... I always knew that you'd leave me anyway. You're treading on awfully thin ice darling, it's so awfully thin. It's almost turning to water, as we speak. *~~#You.Are.Too.Far.Gone.^'\|\|¬.

07-13-2005, 01:20 PM	#10 (permalink)
_The_Repeats_ Music Addict Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Oxford. Woo yeah. Ehem. Posts: 58	Oki doke, don't have a clue what you're talking about...but thanks! __________________ I never wanted to love you, but that's okay... I always knew that you'd leave me anyway. You're treading on awfully thin ice darling, it's so awfully thin. It's almost turning to water, as we speak. *~~#You.Are.Too.Far.Gone.^'\|\|¬.

07-12-2005, 12:28 PM	#2 (permalink)
angel18 Music Addict Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 129	that's good but what is the meaning of the song or poem?

07-13-2005, 08:06 AM	#4 (permalink)
angel18 Music Addict Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 129	well yeah it is. i just couldnt figure out what it was about thats all. i'd hate to be that man in the song.

07-13-2005, 09:27 AM	#5 (permalink)
pastor of muppets Guest Posts: n/a	that networking line didnt fit for me.... otherwise i like it

07-13-2005, 09:30 AM	#7 (permalink)
pastor of muppets Guest Posts: n/a	yeah, put up a link... id like to hear how it sounds.......

07-13-2005, 09:46 AM	#9 (permalink)
pastor of muppets Guest Posts: n/a	heh heh.... i thought you meant you had it on a web page or something... tis k... im sure its sounds good...... EDIT: unless you can zip it then upload it onto here... dont know how big it could be though.....