Addiction (lyrics, rock, solo, bands, songs)

Fenixpunk · 07-07-2005, 11:29 AM

Another one of my bands songs that ive written. This one is sung somewhat slower than most of our songs but picks up on the chorus. the music is still heavy and kinda sludgy with a rockin solo thrown in that ranges from a few seconds to a few minutes depending on our moods.

Addiction

Im not comfortable with change/
find myself slipping away/
in the confusion that ive made.../
with the illusions that ive played

I try to forget/
but i recall/
just when i think ive seen it all/
and everythings yesterdays news.../
no questions asked, no choice to choose

its hard to say what still remains/
lost connections/
broken chains/
portraits the water once reflects.../
The stones been tossed, that scene is wrecked

Chorus:

locked up, broke out, what else could i do?/
gotta get it through my head to stay away from you./
tied up, strapped down, preparing for the tease/
gotta get it through my head what it does to me./

little_dead_girl · 07-15-2005, 02:18 PM

they are really amazing lyrics wats ur band called? they sound kinda good jst reading the words from that song........xxxxxx........

Fenixpunk · 07-15-2005, 02:30 PM

my band is called The Declaimed, i should have alot of our songs somewhere online end of Sept/ early Oct.

right-track · 09-26-2005, 04:39 PM

Hehe...Im watching a documentary on Bob Dylan at the moment and I'v just sang the lyrics to 'Addiction' in a Dylanesque style (sorry Fenix) and it worked beatifully haha.

Good job with the lyrics by the way.

Fenixpunk · 09-26-2005, 04:59 PM

thanks,

Dylanesque eh? ill have to keep that in the back of my mind next time i play it.

right-track · 09-26-2005, 04:59 PM

Please don't ban me

Fenixpunk · 09-26-2005, 05:01 PM

if i could make my vocals twang like dylan, id do it.

tdoc210 · 09-26-2005, 07:31 PM

dude i really like your song were am i gonna be able to purchase your record

Fenixpunk · 09-27-2005, 02:45 PM

ill let you know once everythings completed and in a nice little package.

PerFeCTioNThrUSileNCe · 10-18-2005, 01:10 AM

do you have anything up on the net yet?

07-07-2005, 11:29 AM	#1 (permalink)
Fenixpunk The Erroneous Hoodlum Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: West Side Phoenix Posts: 2,057	Addiction Another one of my bands songs that ive written. This one is sung somewhat slower than most of our songs but picks up on the chorus. the music is still heavy and kinda sludgy with a rockin solo thrown in that ranges from a few seconds to a few minutes depending on our moods. Addiction Im not comfortable with change/ find myself slipping away/ in the confusion that ive made.../ with the illusions that ive played I try to forget/ but i recall/ just when i think ive seen it all/ and everythings yesterdays news.../ no questions asked, no choice to choose its hard to say what still remains/ lost connections/ broken chains/ portraits the water once reflects.../ The stones been tossed, that scene is wrecked Chorus: locked up, broke out, what else could i do?/ gotta get it through my head to stay away from you./ tied up, strapped down, preparing for the tease/ gotta get it through my head what it does to me./ __________________ This message has been approved by Shawn Erroneous - The Declaimed

07-15-2005, 02:18 PM	#2 (permalink)
little_dead_girl Groupie Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: not quite sure Posts: 16	wow they are really amazing lyrics wats ur band called? they sound kinda good jst reading the words from that song........xxxxxx........

07-15-2005, 02:30 PM	#3 (permalink)
Fenixpunk The Erroneous Hoodlum Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: West Side Phoenix Posts: 2,057	my band is called The Declaimed, i should have alot of our songs somewhere online end of Sept/ early Oct. __________________ This message has been approved by Shawn Erroneous - The Declaimed

09-26-2005, 04:59 PM	#5 (permalink)
Fenixpunk The Erroneous Hoodlum Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: West Side Phoenix Posts: 2,057	thanks, Dylanesque eh? ill have to keep that in the back of my mind next time i play it. __________________ This message has been approved by Shawn Erroneous - The Declaimed

09-26-2005, 05:01 PM	#7 (permalink)
Fenixpunk The Erroneous Hoodlum Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: West Side Phoenix Posts: 2,057	if i could make my vocals twang like dylan, id do it. __________________ This message has been approved by Shawn Erroneous - The Declaimed

09-26-2005, 04:39 PM	#4 (permalink)
right-track Atchin' Akai Join Date: May 2005 Location: Unamerica Posts: 8,723	Hehe...Im watching a documentary on Bob Dylan at the moment and I'v just sang the lyrics to 'Addiction' in a Dylanesque style (sorry Fenix) and it worked beatifully haha. Good job with the lyrics by the way.

09-26-2005, 04:59 PM	#6 (permalink)
right-track Atchin' Akai Join Date: May 2005 Location: Unamerica Posts: 8,723	Please don't ban me

09-26-2005, 07:31 PM	#8 (permalink)
tdoc210 ashes against the grain Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: new hampsha Posts: 2,617	dude i really like your song were am i gonna be able to purchase your record __________________ We went back there and they had come and hacked off every inoculated arm. There they were in a pile. A pile of little arms. And I remember... I... I... I cried. I wept like some grandmother. I wanted to tear my teeth out. I didn't know what I wanted to do. And I want to remember it. I never want to forget it. I never want to forget. And then I realized... like I was shot... like I was shot with a diamond... a diamond bullet right through my forehead. And I thought: My God... the genius of that.

09-27-2005, 02:45 PM	#9 (permalink)
Fenixpunk The Erroneous Hoodlum Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: West Side Phoenix Posts: 2,057	ill let you know once everythings completed and in a nice little package. __________________ This message has been approved by Shawn Erroneous - The Declaimed