Tell me what you all think please (title, track, song)

angel18 · 07-05-2005, 01:24 PM

Brutal

Sometimes I feel
That you're a part of me
Although it don't seem real
It's how I want it to be
But if you can't stay then I'll understand
You're just sawdust in my empty hand
If you can't decide
I'll still be true
Just open wide
I'm here for you

And if you think that you've found
A gentle sound
Where love breaks down
It's alright.
And if you can't overcome
What get's you down
Don't get uptight
It's alright.

I'm a shallow man
In an hollow land
On a beaten track under your command
And the sound
In my head goes round and round
Like a drunk on the stairs
who just fell down
But now it seems
Like a distant dream
When it all lived wrong
With our love supreme
And the sound in my head goes round and round
Like a drunk on the stairs who just fell down

And if you think that you've found
A gentle sound
Where love breaks down
It's alright.
And if you can't overcome
What get's you down
Don't get uptight
It's alright.

07-05-2005, 01:31 PM

pretty good

angel18 · 07-05-2005, 01:38 PM

thanx i hope the title for the song seems right

07-05-2005, 01:39 PM

yeah it describes the song pretty well i think..........

punkboy · 07-11-2005, 01:38 PM

sweet stuff man

angel18 · 07-11-2005, 03:09 PM

thanx man

07-05-2005, 01:24 PM	#1 (permalink)
angel18 Music Addict Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 129	Tell me what you all think please Brutal Sometimes I feel That you're a part of me Although it don't seem real It's how I want it to be But if you can't stay then I'll understand You're just sawdust in my empty hand If you can't decide I'll still be true Just open wide I'm here for you And if you think that you've found A gentle sound Where love breaks down It's alright. And if you can't overcome What get's you down Don't get uptight It's alright. I'm a shallow man In an hollow land On a beaten track under your command And the sound In my head goes round and round Like a drunk on the stairs who just fell down But now it seems Like a distant dream When it all lived wrong With our love supreme And the sound in my head goes round and round Like a drunk on the stairs who just fell down And if you think that you've found A gentle sound Where love breaks down It's alright. And if you can't overcome What get's you down Don't get uptight It's alright.

07-05-2005, 01:31 PM	#2 (permalink)
pastor of muppets Guest Posts: n/a	pretty good

07-05-2005, 01:38 PM	#3 (permalink)
angel18 Music Addict Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 129	thanx i hope the title for the song seems right

07-05-2005, 01:39 PM	#4 (permalink)
pastor of muppets Guest Posts: n/a	yeah it describes the song pretty well i think..........

07-11-2005, 01:38 PM	#5 (permalink)
punkboy Groupie Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 4	sweet stuff man

07-11-2005, 03:09 PM	#6 (permalink)
angel18 Music Addict Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 129	thanx man