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Old 05-28-2014, 12:09 AM   #1 (permalink)
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I'm pretty awful at songwriting, and unfortunately the task of it fell to myself and the drummer in our band.

Recently two friends of ours were put in the hospital for suicide attempts, and this is kind of what came out of it. Drummer did the chorus, I just added on.


Should have told me
You should have said
I should have heard your plea
I should have seen

The way you pull your sleeves
Hands in your pocket, said you’d never leave
Why did I believe
Your lies

I wish I pulled you away
Away from the ledge
Away from the ledge

Oh...

I wish I pulled you away
So you didn't fall
So you didn't fall

oh...


Our song we sang
That rainy bus day
And the world is silent
Looking to me


I wish I pulled you away
Away from the ledge
Away from the ledge

Oh...

I wish I pulled you away
So you didn't fall
So you didn't fall

oh...
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Old 08-05-2014, 04:45 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I also really like it. I really felt a lot of emotion in it. Looking forward to read more!
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