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05-06-2014, 05:56 AM | #1 (permalink) |
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Join Date: May 2014
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Check my two musics and tell me something bout them
The first one is finished and it's called "Never Give Up":
You're nearly at the bottom and affraid to succeed. You're like a very pretty flower but you don't plant your seed You know you have the skills but you can't go forward all this because you think that you will be awkward C'mon, stand up you should be though Let's go, oh yeah we're bringing it up so what, who cares if you're good or not just show them what you have and never GIVE UP! (chorus x2) If you don't try to make it then you'll fail for sure You may lose every battle and you can still win the war So go ahead, move foward, you're not alone You know you're a king and you will claim your throne. Try to reach your max then push it harder This isn't an advice this is an order! C'mon, stand up you should be though Let's go, oh yeah we're bringing it up so what, who cares if you're good or not just show them what you have and never GIVE UP! (chorus x2) Never GIVE UP! Never GIVE UP! And now, that's it, end of the test you only got this far cuz you tried your best! The second is called: "This Pain": (this one is unfinished) All I can see is the time that we spent talking and talking, saying what we meant Chatting for hours and thinking 'bout you it was the only thing that I could do We had some fights when things went wrong but after some time we were getting along I know I'm so stupid Don't know what I do I think I have lost my right to love you I know it hurts but I have to say I loved you, I lost you, I cry everyday Tears on my pillow, won't go away And now everything looks grayer than gray I need this pain to get out of my way I know that I failed, I made a mistake Girl, please, listen to me Let the past be erased Without you i'm dying You can't be replaced. PS: I don't plan to sing them, since I can't sing properly, but if anyone isn't feeling creative, pm me and ask for permission to use this musics. |
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