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03-07-2014, 02:37 PM | #1 (permalink) |
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Join Date: Feb 2014
Location: Orange County, CA
Posts: 18
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Brando's Songwriting: Mr. Dreamer (Critiques Welcomed!)
Hello everyone, I just wanted to share a song that I've recently finished, called "Mr. Dreamer". The lyrics tell a story about chasing after desires through these personifications, "Lady Love" and "Mr. Dreamer."
I've always been a person to embrace spontaneity and new direction when the opportunity arises in my life, so I was wondering if it can be heard through these notes and lyrics. Trying to hold my breath, Heating up from the drum beneath my chest I'm feeling alive Chasing after lights on the wild side Hold my hand through the dark I'm caught in the motion of my heart So Mr. Dreamer take me home And Lady love, don't let me go Starting with something new Turn back, 'cause I'm coming after you Looking around to see Can't tell if your looking back to me Hold my hand through the dark I'm caught in the motion of my heart So Mr. Dreamer take me home And Lady love, don't let me go Twenty steps from the gold freaking out but you whisper to my soul I hate this part Staring eyes, oh you had me from the start Hold my hand through the dark I'm caught in the motion of my heart So Mr. Dreamer take me home And Lady love, don't let me go Thank you again all very much for reading, and please leave feedback if you have anything to say! If you're interested in hearing it with song, you can also find it at https://soundcloud.com/brando_music-1/mr-dreamer |
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