GreenDAY23

Here's one of my first songs I've written (put in the chords so you get a better sense of timing), it's basically about how my friends and I used to live such a wild life, but now that most of them are in college I'm sitting at home with the feeling of nostalgia.

[Verse :]

----D -----------A
It's been quite a while
------C------------------G
Since I've been about the town
---C-----------------A
Am I crazy or just hostile?

D---------------A
Nights were the days
----C-------------G
Not that it matters much
------C-----------------------------A
Never really loosing light from where I lay

[Pre-Chorus :]

C---------D----------------A
I've got a disease it's called Insomnia
C----------D-------------A
Fear of the dawn, morning phobia?

[Chorus :]

--D--------------------B A
A years gone by, maybe two
-----C----------------------G
What happened? The curtain drew
--D-------------------B A
Nostalgia that feelings shown
--------C
And I'm asking myself, where have the times

[Interlude :]

G----G---B C
gone?

G G B A
G G B C
G A

That's it so far. One of my first so don't be too harsh, but what do you think its missing ? You think it makes sense?