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Old 06-21-2005, 11:00 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default untitled dance track sort of

neways this is like just some words i have written to go to some type of dance tunes, not sure wat type tho, the beat it goes to is like daaaaa daa daa daa, dadadadadadada. but yeh if you could pls giv me some sort of advice or criticism id really appreciate it, thx.

Come
Come as one
Join the fight
Into the night

See the Stars
See them shine
Its our right
We won the fight

Run, scream and shout
Whatever you want
Whatever you please
The freedoms ours

I am yours
You are mine
Kiss me here
Ill touch you there
Tonights to celebrate

Dance
Like you've never danced before
Dance
Dance like you've never danced before
Dance
Like its your last moment on earth
Dance
Dance like its your last moment on earth
Dance
Dance like the walls are starting to fall
Dance
Dance like you can move no more
Keep
Keep the beat
Keep the beat for that last breath
Keep
Keep the beat
Keep the beat for beyond
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Old 06-22-2005, 03:43 PM   #2 (permalink)
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if anyone has ever listened to Dragonforce, than this could be their next single.

and yes that is insulting anti_poptart_chik, but I don't know what these songs are really supposed to sound like, so my opinion shouldn't count to much on this style.
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Old 07-20-2005, 01:25 AM   #3 (permalink)
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the thing is its nothing to take personally but the lyrics to dance tracks are usually very lame without the beat and music to accompany it...
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