miinah-a-pun

its very honest........any kind of feed back is appreciated


We will meet.....
we will say the world that we are together............
we will kiss...........
questioning every minute
will it be the same forever.............

days and a year will pass by..............
but we will keep rollin'
saying-ohh! we are just good friends
saying-ohh! we are meant for each other............
saying-i miss you in the midnights................
questioning every minute
questioning every hour...........
asking those lifeless stones
to lead us back to our own home.................
where jealousy fades away on its own............................................... ...
where jealousy fades away on its own............................................... ...
where jealousy fades away on its own............................................... ...
where jealousy fades away on its own............................................... ...
and we will tell the world WE WILL be together forever.........................

Scarlett O'Hara

Boring. Words are to simple. Doesn't show much emotion. It's like something you'd sing at the football.

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Taxman

Simple words may work all right with good melody. Especially in pop music. So write what you want.